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Taryn My Eternal Goddess
i'll meet you by the sea
nude and open
no guile will you find
azure eyes gazing into brown pools
telling truths hidden
untying binds that hinder
we are free to feel
exploring the depths of each other
hands on milky flesh
kissing you tenderly
passionate tangerine tongue
laps at your sweet spots
taking you in my arms
I am unafraid
in your shade I'm home
rolling in the waves
thunderclaps
applaud our love making
the stars shine on silken skin
spun from the cosmos
my lovely one you shimmer
bringing tenderness from my lips
they meet yours for an eternal kiss
yes my love i'll meet you by the sea
where two will be one
intimate in a way
no words can express
I hope this love letter
finds you in all your glory
bedecked in moonlight
my eternal Goddess
(inspired by my beautiful Taryn)
(while listening to Andrea Bocelli Con te Partiro)
[/https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcrfvP11Hboi]
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 19th Aug 2015
| Edited 27th Jun 2017
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19th Aug 2015 6:29pm
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 7:40pm
lovely Taryn a true beauty she is..
she is the ocean my poetic soul swims in..
thank you for such a heart touching comment :)
with love Brenda
she is the ocean my poetic soul swims in..
thank you for such a heart touching comment :)
with love Brenda
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 6:47pm
Oh my good goddess.
I love this from you. Especially today.
Sweet, giving, taking, loving, wanting.
Woman.
A man said words to me recently, eves child. I had heard the term. Had an idea of what it was. From poems, a band lol, pictures. Biblical. Imagined owning original sin, and sex. Thats lusty and powerful.
But there is something else. When a woman shows it, somehow.
Its beauty and innocence too.
Lovely you have captured it.
🌹
Hard decision. This will be on my list, i have to remove one. So please know it will be. Might take a minute. Have to decide, and a fumbling nut with technology.💃👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠💄
I love this from you. Especially today.
Sweet, giving, taking, loving, wanting.
Woman.
A man said words to me recently, eves child. I had heard the term. Had an idea of what it was. From poems, a band lol, pictures. Biblical. Imagined owning original sin, and sex. Thats lusty and powerful.
But there is something else. When a woman shows it, somehow.
Its beauty and innocence too.
Lovely you have captured it.
🌹
Hard decision. This will be on my list, i have to remove one. So please know it will be. Might take a minute. Have to decide, and a fumbling nut with technology.💃👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠👠💄
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thank you beautiful Jennifer for such a lovely comment making me smile wide :)
with love Brenda
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 6:49pm
oh brenda, this is as gorgeous as your muse... she is indeed a wonderful woman
tres belle, bella
xoxox
tres belle, bella
xoxox
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 7:43pm
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 7:29pm
Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 7:43pm
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 7:45pm
This is a Truly Majical write Brenda.
It has an Entrancing way about it
that Lulls into an atmosphere of
Calmness and Warmth... Enjoyed thoroughly
Respect... Pan
It has an Entrancing way about it
that Lulls into an atmosphere of
Calmness and Warmth... Enjoyed thoroughly
Respect... Pan
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 8:24pm
thank you Pan it was inspired by a true beauty that makes me feel calm and warm :)
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 8:26pm
"kissing you tenderly
passionate tangerine tongue
laps at your sweet spots"
~yum & seriously sexy.. as an alluring sea witch of passion <~sed in purrz
"the stars shine on silken skin
spun from the cosmos
my lovely one you shimmer"
~gawdamn perfect fucking poetry Ladyluv! [cursin means I very much love your sweet lines].
such a breath-stealing myriad color-splash on the brain.
your love letter is a well of beauty, my sweetie..loves ya!
~d
passionate tangerine tongue
laps at your sweet spots"
~yum & seriously sexy.. as an alluring sea witch of passion <~sed in purrz
"the stars shine on silken skin
spun from the cosmos
my lovely one you shimmer"
~gawdamn perfect fucking poetry Ladyluv! [cursin means I very much love your sweet lines].
such a breath-stealing myriad color-splash on the brain.
your love letter is a well of beauty, my sweetie..loves ya!
~d
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 9:40pm
I always love you delicious comment lovely d~
you always make me feel creamy inside..
with your take on my ink..
thank you beautiful..
with love Crim
you always make me feel creamy inside..
with your take on my ink..
thank you beautiful..
with love Crim
Re. Eternal Goddess
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19th Aug 2015 8:43pm
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 9:41pm
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 8:44pm
Absolutely gorgeous Crim! I sometimes picture you as a siren, both wicked and benign. You're singing very sweetly this time. Your goddess is a lucky lady!
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 9:42pm
thank you Sir Crow for such a lovely comment though I am the lucky one :)
with love Crim
with love Crim
Re. Eternal Goddess
Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 9:28pm
Well with an inspiration like Bocelli one can't go wrong. You did a fantastic job immortalizing a muse, great idea for a comp Brenda.
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 9:43pm
thank you Rina yes Bocelli helped but it was my beautiful siren that inspired this ink..
with love Brenda
with love Brenda
Re. Eternal Goddess
19th Aug 2015 11:56pm
Very lovely and ultra romantic. Adore the tone the narrator uses for speaking to the Goddess sensual and loving. So very sublime Crim.***
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20th Aug 2015 00:53am
Re. Eternal Goddess
20th Aug 2015 1:33am
The sea beckons you
Under the sensual light
Of lunars playground
A poetess
Take flight
Beautiful
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20th Aug 2015 3:44am
Re. Eternal Goddess
20th Aug 2015 2:03am
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20th Aug 2015 3:45am
Re. Eternal Goddess
21st Aug 2015 1:02pm
beautifully written, soft gentle and tender - gave me that warm fuzzy feeling inside :-)
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21st Aug 2015 3:49pm
Re. Eternal Goddess
Anonymous
21st Aug 2015 8:54pm
Brenda, this is beautiful, and brilliantly done.. with love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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22nd Aug 2015 3:06pm
Re. Eternal Goddess
23rd Aug 2015 1:35am
"where two will be one
intimate in a way
no words can express"
Is there anything better? <rhetorical question> :)
Ohhh, lovely little lass, you capture the complete realm of passions royalty in this splendid piece.
you know, ;)
C.
intimate in a way
no words can express"
Is there anything better? <rhetorical question> :)
Ohhh, lovely little lass, you capture the complete realm of passions royalty in this splendid piece.
you know, ;)
C.
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
23rd Aug 2015 4:37pm
thank you Chad for showing me and this write love..
it is quite special to my heart as is the lady who inspired it :)
with love Brenda
it is quite special to my heart as is the lady who inspired it :)
with love Brenda
Re. Eternal Goddess
13th Sep 2015 9:20pm
Rhyming comment;
Could be a love letter to Aphrodite,
The Goddess of Love who was born from the sea.
Could be a love letter to Aphrodite,
The Goddess of Love who was born from the sea.
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Re: Re. Eternal Goddess
14th Sep 2015 3:44pm