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You hear me!
Hear me!
I have wounds that go miles deep.
My scars though are thick.
So i do not ooze.
To deny me your words, because i am sunny.
Ouches and leaves a mark.
You know, that is fought for light?
But tell me, i am not good enough
Deep enough
For your pain
Hurts me hard!
I bleed
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun.
I have wounds that go miles deep.
My scars though are thick.
So i do not ooze.
To deny me your words, because i am sunny.
Ouches and leaves a mark.
You know, that is fought for light?
But tell me, i am not good enough
Deep enough
For your pain
Hurts me hard!
I bleed
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun.
Published 19th Aug 2015
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19th Aug 2015 00:37am
19th Aug 2015 00:47am
19th Aug 2015 00:54am
This one def "Ouches and leaves a mark.".. dammit to doubt & its painful effects. ;(
"But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And again proudly wear the sun."
~mend your gorgeous broken, m'doll! ...Your end, with you reaching back to sunshine..lovely strength!
best wishes that you are set ablaze in smiles! this speaks soul-sharp in my tummy.. *mwahs, you
~d
"But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And again proudly wear the sun."
~mend your gorgeous broken, m'doll! ...Your end, with you reaching back to sunshine..lovely strength!
best wishes that you are set ablaze in smiles! this speaks soul-sharp in my tummy.. *mwahs, you
~d
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19th Aug 2015 2:49am
Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 5:18am
A poem well-embellished by one of my favourite artists.
19th Aug 2015 5:27am
19th Aug 2015 11:22am
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun.
What a proud, brave heart you have. Wear the sun well!! Another wonderful piece of work from a growing favorite of mine.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun.
What a proud, brave heart you have. Wear the sun well!! Another wonderful piece of work from a growing favorite of mine.
19th Aug 2015 11:53am
Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 2:12pm
Ahhh . . . "But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over"
As you come back smiling he is ever ready to make up . . . For awhile . . . . But soon he will deliver more scars, deeper one . . . Tigers, as they say, never lose their spots . . .
Scar over"
As you come back smiling he is ever ready to make up . . . For awhile . . . . But soon he will deliver more scars, deeper one . . . Tigers, as they say, never lose their spots . . .
19th Aug 2015 2:26pm
No sweetie. Not what i was talking about. My deepest scars are ancient. I am good. This was simply talking about someone not seeing that i had many levels to my human being and felt as much as them even though im not dark. Im sunny and happy and have worked hard to be. But i do appreciate your words and care.
Anonymous
19th Aug 2015 3:40pm
Sometimes I wonder why I even comment. Sorry about my idiot thoughts on your fine poetry.
19th Aug 2015 3:56pm
Oh sweetie, please dont say that. Love your comnents! Just wanted you to know im fine. No proaching tigers ☀ always say what you feel doll.
19th Aug 2015 3:59pm
19th Aug 2015 3:39pm
Lovely Jennifer this is one fierce write..
love this..
"I bleed
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun"
I see the sun when you enter hear beautiful lioness
with love Brenda
love this..
"I bleed
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun"
I see the sun when you enter hear beautiful lioness
with love Brenda
19th Aug 2015 3:57pm
19th Aug 2015 5:49pm
"I bleed
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun."
^^^^^^^
this is such a powerful statement, miss jen, you are clearly so much more than 2D
xoxox
Cherry red
But i will scratch and claw my way back to smiling.
Scar over.
And another day proudly wear the sun."
^^^^^^^
this is such a powerful statement, miss jen, you are clearly so much more than 2D
xoxox
19th Aug 2015 6:07pm
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19th Aug 2015 8:22pm
Thank you. 🌹 Ironic to be noticed by a blood flooded brai........ 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨🔫🔫🔫 .. .the headache im having now? You must know the remedy. Dead serious. Teeeheee
Dig it.
Dig it.
19th Aug 2015 8:44pm
Remedy that you Are looking for is all in your subconscious.. You just need to scratch a little more..
19th Aug 2015 9:52pm
19th Aug 2015 9:54pm
In all seriousness, welcome here. Read your piece, v cool. Thanks for reading mine.
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2nd Oct 2015 4:14am
I felt this one. I can relate and Ill share said sun whichya once I get it down. <3
2nd Oct 2015 4:37am
Thanks so much my dear. Much appreciated. Will be reading you to return the favor tomorrow to return your sweet favor.
J
J
3rd Oct 2015 3:53am
Anonymous
4th Apr 2020 3:28pm
This is great stuff. It's far reaching and human. I see the flesh personified. I will say its powerful and I feel it.
