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Force
i'm swollen
tight
won't tell
Precisely why
suffice to say
last night i played
and now i want
You
to force Your way
Inside
my
tender
bruised
swollen tight
and
sore.
silky
succulent
soaking
fragrant
honey
awaits
Sir...
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Re. Force
......and I press my way inside your divinely tortured chamber, perhaps finding just a bit of delicious "discomfort" of my own. Not enough words to describe my feelings about this brazen desire you speak. Mmmmmm....I want *in*
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Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 4:33pm
Mr_Mahogany_Wood, luv ~ :-*
I am most fortunate, indeed, to find you here pressing upon, ah, within me so insistently... ;-*
You are a fine one to speak of a dearth of words for feelings elicited, you know, luv. ;-p
If you have pressed your way inside my divinely tortured chamber, how much more "in" were you wanting to be, luv? ;-p
I am most fortunate, indeed, to find you here pressing upon, ah, within me so insistently... ;-*
You are a fine one to speak of a dearth of words for feelings elicited, you know, luv. ;-p
If you have pressed your way inside my divinely tortured chamber, how much more "in" were you wanting to be, luv? ;-p
Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 1:38pm
o, thee ache
& then there's
a different ache 'it' provokes //// bless ye (missed ye lately, but.......)
& then there's
a different ache 'it' provokes //// bless ye (missed ye lately, but.......)
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Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 4:40pm
Ahhh, DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn, luv ~ :-*
Mmm...the ache and its provocation, indeed. ;-*
Thank you, luv. I've missed you too and DUP...
Mmm...the ache and its provocation, indeed. ;-*
Thank you, luv. I've missed you too and DUP...
Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 3:17pm
Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 4:45pm
Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very much! I take it my request is not taken by you amiss? ;-*
I am, indeed, most gratified, that you find it an awesome behest, luv...
Thank you so very much! I take it my request is not taken by you amiss? ;-*
I am, indeed, most gratified, that you find it an awesome behest, luv...
Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 5:32pm
Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 6:16pm
Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
You pamper me with comparisons to such delectable confections... ;-*
Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 6:21pm
Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 3:53pm
Re: Re. Force
Ahhh, xmar82, luv ~ :-*
You comprehend, fully, the inherent bliss and from you I expect no less... ;-*
Thank you for always knowing so well and for that oh-so-lovely yes, luv. :-*
Re: Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 6:24pm
Ahhh, again, luv ~ :-*
Pain, gain, mislain, again... ;-*
Oh! Again, again, this pain no bane, rather reign sweet rain of pain but do restrain not too much rein no strain but I would fain gain my friend again, again... :-*
Pain, gain, mislain, again... ;-*
Oh! Again, again, this pain no bane, rather reign sweet rain of pain but do restrain not too much rein no strain but I would fain gain my friend again, again... :-*
Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 7:25pm
I love every word of this, particularly the last stanza. Your voice slays me with every sultry inflection. This one's a keeper I'm going to save for bedtime and sweet dreams. Thanks for the fantasy Savaja!
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Re: Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 4:05am
Thank you very much, crowfly, luv. :-*
I am ever so glad this has found such favor in your eyes...and elsewhere. ;-*
Tis not quite slaying I'm after, luv; no carnage do I wish to wreak... :-* You gift me greatly with such extravagance, luv. ;-*
You are most welcome for the fantasy; thank You for your so visceral and intense response... ;-*
I am ever so glad this has found such favor in your eyes...and elsewhere. ;-*
Tis not quite slaying I'm after, luv; no carnage do I wish to wreak... :-* You gift me greatly with such extravagance, luv. ;-*
You are most welcome for the fantasy; thank You for your so visceral and intense response... ;-*
Re. Force
14th Aug 2015 9:45pm
if u dnt put that voice away.. some one gone be having babys after listen to this. lol
great work . smooth feeling. relaxing yet pulling .
great work . smooth feeling. relaxing yet pulling .
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Re: Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 2:12pm
Thank you so, Enigmatic Inkling, luv! :-*
You give me far too much credit for others' reproductive success, but you made me laugh. ;-D
Glad I am that you found enjoyment herein, luv, and relaxation as well. ;-*
You give me far too much credit for others' reproductive success, but you made me laugh. ;-D
Glad I am that you found enjoyment herein, luv, and relaxation as well. ;-*
Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 1:03am
Beautiful Savaja so achingly perfect is this primal lust..
deliciously sensual..
with love Crim
deliciously sensual..
with love Crim
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Re: Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 2:18pm
Thank you so very much, crimsin, luv. :-*
You're using words that make my mouth water, you know.
Achingly, primal, deliciously sensual, Crim... ;-*
You're using words that make my mouth water, you know.
Achingly, primal, deliciously sensual, Crim... ;-*
Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 1:03am
Beautiful Savaja so achingly perfect is this primal lust..
deliciously sensual..
with love Crim
deliciously sensual..
with love Crim
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Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 1:25am
Savaja lovely,
You simply, gracefully and eloquently just flow so beautifully every single time, in every piece you write.. ( and your voice, So soothing such as medicine to aches beyond a cold beautiful)..
Shall no entry be gained, I have just the remedy for you and will give and give 💋
You simply, gracefully and eloquently just flow so beautifully every single time, in every piece you write.. ( and your voice, So soothing such as medicine to aches beyond a cold beautiful)..
Shall no entry be gained, I have just the remedy for you and will give and give 💋
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Re: Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 3:15pm
Thank you ever so much, vivid_mocha, luv. :-*
You gift me beyond measure with such dazzling praise.
And, quicken my pulse wildly with promises of enchanting elixir administered by your ravishing self o'er and o'er... ;-*
You gift me beyond measure with such dazzling praise.
And, quicken my pulse wildly with promises of enchanting elixir administered by your ravishing self o'er and o'er... ;-*
Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 4:52am
A short poem of great artistry and overarching sensual power. One of the more unique erotic poems in the genre.
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Re: Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 6:07pm
Ahhh, candycrier, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very, very much for your resplendent remarks regarding this poem. You honor me abundantly, luv. :-*
Thank you very, very much for your resplendent remarks regarding this poem. You honor me abundantly, luv. :-*
Re. Force
oh my....my...my...mmmm..
goddess..you..
you're too much
"i'm swollen
tight
won't tell
Precisely why
suffice to say
last night i played
and now i want
You
to force Your way
Inside
my
tender
bruised
swollen tight
and
sore."
so sultry and feminine
...dripping with mystique
you invade my mind ..
ever so sweetly..
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Re. Force
15th Aug 2015 8:35pm
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Re. Force
16th Aug 2015 3:28am
This is a gorgeous write, Savaja. Love the hungering for more with the evidence of prior satisfaction still lingering. That is a beautiful thing.
Michael
Michael
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Re. Force
2nd Sep 2015 2:15pm
am thinking we need to have a comp titled the Queen of Erotica....am sure you'd win it.... :)
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