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Woman Scorned

You are rats of old London town
scampering among feces flowing
spreading treacherous disease
gut wrenching sickness
for those blinded
to your parasitic pastimes.
Let the whole city burn!
Fuck.
You.

by DB (06/05/2011)

An exercise on how to use profanity more effectively based on (also by DB)
Woman Scorned (Facebook Edition)
You are a fucking asshole!
You fucking piece of shit
I can't believe
what a fucking bastard
you are
You make me wanna fucking
hurl
I hope you rot in fucking hell
muthafucker!

Written by Darkbee

(DB)

Published 5th Jun 2011 | Edited 8th Jun 2011

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Woman Scorned

lepperochan (CraicDealer)

6th Jun 2011 8:32pm

ha! the black death. is this the woman talking ? no dont answer that!
i prefer to think of it as the man.

you kept your flow well here darren it would have been easy to fall into the rhyming trap.

i enjoyed this alot.

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Darkbee (DB)

6th Jun 2011 8:57pm

Thanks Eamonn, appreciate the encouragement.

Bring forth the comfy chair... and the rhyming trap!
No! You can't make me! ARRGGGHH!

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Midnight_Sun (Jules)

8th Jun 2011 8:41am

I really liked this piece. It was short and to the point, so it was easy to keep people's attention. And while it left some to the imagination so that everyone could interpret it differently it still had a strong plot. Great job!