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Spring & Summer Haikus
(Written for the Spring/Summer Haiku competition)
Buds like newborn babes
in colorful screams awake
Springtime’s fertile flaunt
Hints of red and pink
through the sheer white fabric flash
sweet Summer surprise
Hot pavement steaming
sun-kissed diamonds cascading
blessed Summer rain
Buds like newborn babes
in colorful screams awake
Springtime’s fertile flaunt
Hints of red and pink
through the sheer white fabric flash
sweet Summer surprise
Hot pavement steaming
sun-kissed diamonds cascading
blessed Summer rain
Published 5th Aug 2015
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5th Aug 2015 9:23pm
Gorgeous work Gahdess! Really refreshing in this drought-stricken corner of the planet. Good luck with the comp!
5th Aug 2015 9:35pm
5th Aug 2015 9:55pm
im new to this thing called poetry, i love the reading... Its inspiring.
5th Aug 2015 10:01pm
Welcome, Ian, to DU! I am confident that you will enjoy the site and I look forward to reading your work. Thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement!
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5th Aug 2015 10:11pm
Absolutely gorgeous GW, you sure know how to use that paint brush to paint a skillful images of beautiful seasons.
Good luck in the comp :)
Good luck in the comp :)
5th Aug 2015 10:43pm
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8th Aug 2015 00:22am
8th Aug 2015 00:34am
Thank you Shakka! Life's too short for anything less...although sometimes I have my negative vibes too...less often though.
