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Hunt
Silly boys.
Think they want jello and g strings,
some dumb blonde his buddy brings.
Then one night he really gets down.
Baby now I'm in town.
Rum n coke.
Downtown bar full of frat boys.
Yum. Which will be tonights fun toy?
Taking the one over there.
With the sweet eyes and curly hair.
Between legs.
The young girls are still circling,
Get the fuck back while I'm working!
Take him to my house.
Gonna turn this bitch out.
Cock's hard.
Im going down on all fours.
He's sprawled out on the floor.
My sweet young thing is just shaking. Ha! So pretty ripe for the taking.
Titty's out.
I hold it and tell him to suck.
No! You'll fuck when I say fuck!
These young boys are so easy.
To teach how to please me.
Cunt spread.
I back up on that dick.
8' long and real thick.
Lay back and just ride.
Dont care who's inside.
So close.
Scream I'm ready are you!?
Dont you dare stop till i'm through!
Both of us creaming.
He cries fuck! Am I dreaming?!
Wipe up.
He reaches for an embrace.
I cant even look at his face!
He wants me as a lover?
Im already on to another......................
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Think they want jello and g strings,
some dumb blonde his buddy brings.
Then one night he really gets down.
Baby now I'm in town.
Rum n coke.
Downtown bar full of frat boys.
Yum. Which will be tonights fun toy?
Taking the one over there.
With the sweet eyes and curly hair.
Between legs.
The young girls are still circling,
Get the fuck back while I'm working!
Take him to my house.
Gonna turn this bitch out.
Cock's hard.
Im going down on all fours.
He's sprawled out on the floor.
My sweet young thing is just shaking. Ha! So pretty ripe for the taking.
Titty's out.
I hold it and tell him to suck.
No! You'll fuck when I say fuck!
These young boys are so easy.
To teach how to please me.
Cunt spread.
I back up on that dick.
8' long and real thick.
Lay back and just ride.
Dont care who's inside.
So close.
Scream I'm ready are you!?
Dont you dare stop till i'm through!
Both of us creaming.
He cries fuck! Am I dreaming?!
Wipe up.
He reaches for an embrace.
I cant even look at his face!
He wants me as a lover?
Im already on to another......................
..............................................
.......................💋
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 4th Aug 2015
| Edited 6th Aug 2015
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4th Aug 2015 6:40am
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4th Aug 2015 6:54am
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 7:03am
Oh wow! There's a word I dare not use, but the Urban Dictionary describes it as "A woman with the morals of a man." This redefines it. Great read...
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See niw that i know the word is slut your comment takes on new meaning! Redefine the word slut, i certainly hope so. Im surprised by the defination, wonan with same set of morals as a man, loosely. A man has a conquest, hes applauded. She does, slut. Yes, i would like to redefine it. 💋 this is a sad poem to me. This woman is so lonely, and filling her self with more emptiness. You make me think Sir. Thank you.
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Aghh!! I cant think of the word!? Thanks Sir! LoL different perspective for me, wanted to turn the tables. Think outside my proverbial box. 💋
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4th Aug 2015 7:08am
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4th Aug 2015 7:09am
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4th Aug 2015 8:18am
she's a killer. teach those dudes what a woman is.
seduction in her aspect & her eyes...
seduction in her aspect & her eyes...
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Re: Re. Hunt
4th Aug 2015 8:25am
Oh John, you referenced my favorite poem. She walks in beauty like the night.......thank you always for reading and commenting. You were my first, havent said that in...well a very long time lol. Night. 💋
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 1:17pm
Taking them on, a dime or a dozen. Hard cock made to order for your soft places . . . Gotta love it . . .
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4th Aug 2015 1:25pm
Hehehe, yeah you do. A sordid piece, i know. But was fun to write! Thanks Jerry! 💋
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4th Aug 2015 4:29pm
a huntress out for a fun and pleasure... enjoying life to the fullest with no strings attach... wow you laid this out wonderfully Jenn... great ink!
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4th Aug 2015 6:52pm
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4th Aug 2015 6:10pm
I don't see this as a negative thing at all... In fact if it is it's for those poor bastards whom clearly can't match this woman's prowess! CUM to think of it, by comparison as men we rarely can match a woman's raw n pure sexual prowess, course
It never stops me from trying! lol
It never stops me from trying! lol
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4th Aug 2015 6:54pm
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Sure wouldn't mind being prey! Pretty different from most of your offerings.
You are definitely in charge,Really enjoyed it.
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4th Aug 2015 6:51pm
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4th Aug 2015 7:36pm
And see k2m, right there. You wouldnt mind being her prey. Roles reversed, im the poor young thing being hunted by an older man, he floors me sexually, im eating my heart out 3 days later because he hasnt called. Npw, think ive matured enough that i could enjoy a good fuck with a great lover and be fune the next day. I choose not to, i now enjoy sex with someone i have an intellectual spark with. Sapiosexual i think is the word. Damn, hope i got tjat right. Being sexually attracted to intelligence.
Re. Hunt
4th Aug 2015 9:57pm
god's tits & teeth, miss jen this is just... just... well it's just darn addictive really... switch[ing] it up ltm
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i adore this for it's sexual liberation, absolutely uninhibited hedonism...
"Gonna turn this bitch out. "
... you've set an exhilarating pace & i'm positively breathless
much enjoyed
~ k
xo
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i adore this for it's sexual liberation, absolutely uninhibited hedonism...
"Gonna turn this bitch out. "
... you've set an exhilarating pace & i'm positively breathless
much enjoyed
~ k
xo
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Re. Hunt
4th Aug 2015 10:34pm
Lol gods tits and teeth, priceless. Thank you. In reality switch(ing) is not my thing. But in fantasy we get to go places we wouldnt normally, and i admit, it was fun! Thanks so much for your comment Katja. Made me grin. 😄💋
Re. Hunt
5th Aug 2015 1:10am
Very smart write
Sex, sure exciting
This was so meaningless
So many get stuck in this circle
A circle that will never
Let them escape to the limits
Happiness one ride at a time
Filling gaps of dead space
Love her power I will admit, a challenge indeed, and I would have excepted happily
Sex, sure exciting
This was so meaningless
So many get stuck in this circle
A circle that will never
Let them escape to the limits
Happiness one ride at a time
Filling gaps of dead space
Love her power I will admit, a challenge indeed, and I would have excepted happily
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5th Aug 2015 4:09am
Thank you, and i appreciate your view on this kind of sex. Not what im into at all. But writing it was fun 💋 wanted to do something different. always eager for your hot words.
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5th Aug 2015 3:21am
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5th Aug 2015 4:12am
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5th Aug 2015 7:49am
"Between legs.
The young girls are still circling,
Get the fuck back while I'm working!" <~ perfect, just tell it, gf! lmsao*
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"Take him to my house.
Gonna turn this bitch out."
~gawdamn sexy bravado..
"Cunt spread.
I back up on that dick.
8' long and real thick."
~my fav.. you never fail to share such dripping hot thoughts, luved!
empowering fun switch to creamed femme fatale.. adored the girly 'tude here!
such a versatile pen m'lady.. enjoy all sides read..
awesome "job" & gdntes;)
~d
The young girls are still circling,
Get the fuck back while I'm working!" <~ perfect, just tell it, gf! lmsao*
~
"Take him to my house.
Gonna turn this bitch out."
~gawdamn sexy bravado..
"Cunt spread.
I back up on that dick.
8' long and real thick."
~my fav.. you never fail to share such dripping hot thoughts, luved!
empowering fun switch to creamed femme fatale.. adored the girly 'tude here!
such a versatile pen m'lady.. enjoy all sides read..
awesome "job" & gdntes;)
~d
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Re: Re. Hunt
5th Aug 2015 8:51am
Lol i dig your comments so much. Thank you doll, just makes me feel good. Gnites to you, muuuuaagh! 💋
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5th Aug 2015 12:48pm
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6th Aug 2015 00:16am
WOW! I've been a slut all my life and proud of it...fuckin' awesomely honest and powerful poem Jennifer.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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6th Aug 2015 00:50am
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2015 00:17am
Wow Jen...I see I have to get here early to comment on you or scroll down for 5 minutes......LOL!!! Goodness.....this is a sexy piece with a tint of fun as well...the ending was a great great twist.....enjoyed xo :)
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Re: Re. Hunt
6th Aug 2015 00:48am
Awe, thanks doll! Makes me so happy when anyone comments so nicely, especially when they are writers i enjoy like you. 💋
Re: Re. Hunt
6th Aug 2015 8:51pm
Why thanks! I think the first time i saw you was commenting on the Kiss 💋i hope it was the first of mine you read and then this, they are polar opposite and would make each stronger. Loved yours. Glad you're here doll!
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7th Aug 2015 8:52pm
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31st Aug 2015 6:26pm
Yes, i meant 8 feet long. Im really cconfused ny your elephant comments. You subscribe to my work, but havent said anything constructive about it.
But thanks for readin though.
But thanks for readin though.
Re. Hunt
10th Oct 2015 10:04am
Why shouldn't a woman pick up men she fancies? A man does it and he's some kind of hero figure. A woman does it and she's branded with all sorts of nasty names. not exactly fair is it? Funny thing, there are so many bad names/labels for women and so few for men.
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Re: Re. Hunt
10th Oct 2015 11:23am
That's why when a man really ticks me off, I call him a slag bitch! Lol thanks Blocat, took me to an old. This is not how I go bout things, well? Lol no. But it sure is fun writing about it!
Love
Jennifer
Love
Jennifer