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Mastery
You blow
my mind
my expectations
And
manage
coetaneously
To
make me
wish
want wantonly
For
Discourse:
subtle, bold, complete
Intercourse:
gentle, sublime, replete
my mind
my expectations
And
manage
coetaneously
To
make me
wish
want wantonly
For
Discourse:
subtle, bold, complete
Intercourse:
gentle, sublime, replete
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 2:13am
Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 2:23am
I like your distinction between "discourse" and "intercourse." Combining the two can be bliss, but it does take some mastery. Or a mistress like you.
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 4:41am
subtle conversation leads to bedroom satisfaction. ever sublimely wanton...
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 5:54am
"manage
coetaneously" <~~ so Very important!
&
"Intercourse:
gentle, sublime, replete" <~~ this is the sugar..
~ Aaannd.~..
"Discourse:
subtle, bold, complete" <~~ then *this.. this is the spice to the sugar.. *get & luv this ..
~lovely overload of thots here.. each with its own aggressive tingle of "...yes, please!"
appreciate the idea of scrumptious mastery & ur everplay on words, my fine-penned Lady*S!
luvluv you, a bit roughly, even.. *mwah n lip-nips
~d.
coetaneously" <~~ so Very important!
&
"Intercourse:
gentle, sublime, replete" <~~ this is the sugar..
~ Aaannd.~..
"Discourse:
subtle, bold, complete" <~~ then *this.. this is the spice to the sugar.. *get & luv this ..
~lovely overload of thots here.. each with its own aggressive tingle of "...yes, please!"
appreciate the idea of scrumptious mastery & ur everplay on words, my fine-penned Lady*S!
luvluv you, a bit roughly, even.. *mwah n lip-nips
~d.
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 7:25am
A sultry allure to this piece that leads to an ultimate fulfillment... and much accredited to the discourse in my opinion. Much enjoyed.
Michael
Michael
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 3:41pm
this one definitely a mastery put together... i like how the words flow so well in it's structure and message convey... great drop Savaja! :D
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 4:00pm
savaja, lovely oracle, this is one of those times i just want to lick that beautiful mind of yours
what a sapiosexual feast you serve up to w[h]et the appetite
xoxox
what a sapiosexual feast you serve up to w[h]et the appetite
xoxox
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 4:22pm
Savaja I could just sink into your delicious ink
a bountiful feast for the mind and body it is
beautiful with love Crim
a bountiful feast for the mind and body it is
beautiful with love Crim
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Re. Mastery
1st Aug 2015 7:01pm
Re. Mastery
Anonymous
1st Aug 2015 10:12pm
Miss Savaja. . .this piece reminds me of a riddle wrapped in a mystery inside an enigma. . .Cannot tell who is actually desiring who?. . .Cleverly crafted. . .Enjoyed, as always. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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Re. Mastery
2nd Aug 2015 7:17pm
Makes me Wish Want Wantonly
Love these words. I really dig the way your illiteration moves into the next thought. Just exquisitely done sweetness. The ecstasy in your works, brings me to my knees. 💋
Love these words. I really dig the way your illiteration moves into the next thought. Just exquisitely done sweetness. The ecstasy in your works, brings me to my knees. 💋
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Re. Mastery
3rd Aug 2015 12:13pm
So much said in so few words.
Loved the tempo; could hear
spoken off the page
Loved the tempo; could hear
spoken off the page
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Re. Mastery
6th Aug 2015 10:37pm
Re. Mastery
Your beautifulness lends my back its arches, my fingers a unique brail to read of.. & my mind.... yes. Bold & sensually unearthing.
My gosh, ok will silence myself..
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