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No strings attached
drinking gin at the bar
eyeing the girl without the bra
seeing her nipples taut
against her blouse
and he wondered
will she swing for me
will she go down on her knee
will she send me to Ecstasy
another girl with very short shorts
pubic hair peeping between her legs
her tight bottom wiggling
like two fat piglets fighting
and he wondered
will she smile when impaled
will she moan when she sails
the pleasure sea, horizontal
then he thought about his wife
once young they surfed
the pleasure ocean every night
each union a vow affirmed
laughing together and loving hard
fighting life's every obstacle
crying when they lost their child
a soldier shot in a senseless war
no casual sex please he thought
you never know where they've been
or what lies within
so he walked out the door.
*this poem was entered in a competition here. thank you for reading*
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Re. No strings attached
Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 12:48pm
The message is clear, but the images here "her tight bottom wiggling like two fat piglet fighting " is classic! Love it.
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4th Aug 2015 4:58am
I actually saw that fat piglets on someone...inspired then Thanks Derrick for dropping by. So kind of you.:)
Re. No strings attached
Anonymous
31st Jul 2015 1:37pm
What a surprising end! I'm impressed, good stuff.
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4th Aug 2015 4:59am
I had a choice...I made him suffer and sent him home.:) Thanks for dropping by R_Evolver and for reading.
Re. No strings attached
31st Jul 2015 8:28pm
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4th Aug 2015 5:01am
Re. No strings attached
31st Jul 2015 8:54pm
Loyalty (to marriage) in the face of a double temptation.
Could not help make a connection between the lines about the first girl's braless breasts and the question "Will she swing for me"!
Could not help make a connection between the lines about the first girl's braless breasts and the question "Will she swing for me"!
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4th Aug 2015 5:00am
Re. No strings attached
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31st Jul 2015 9:10pm
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4th Aug 2015 5:02am
Re. No strings attached
1st Aug 2015 4:29am
The wandering eye of a dedicated man- nicely put Dear Grace!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
Good Luck in the comp!!!
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Re: Re. No strings attached
4th Aug 2015 5:03am
Let the eye wander....not the heart. Thanks Soul for reading and leaving a nice comment.:)
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4th Aug 2015 5:03am
Re. No strings attached
4th Aug 2015 5:20am
Will she smile when impaled
Will she moan .....
Love those couple of lines. Some really strong images conveyed here. Made me laugh a little. 💋
Will she moan .....
Love those couple of lines. Some really strong images conveyed here. Made me laugh a little. 💋
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Re: Re. No strings attached
4th Aug 2015 5:44am
Calamitygin, me too...smiling when I did. Because my ex would have done all of that and more...haha:)
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6th Aug 2015 6:20am
Re. No strings attached
6th Aug 2015 5:16am
This was so tasteful and erotic, I felt as if
there seeing all that you presented thru
your words. Am needing airs at this moment..
there seeing all that you presented thru
your words. Am needing airs at this moment..
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6th Aug 2015 8:40am