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Mascara runs
Pinned by hot dream of yesterweek..
I cream~ache~need.. for full~throat deep,
past gag reflex, forced to my knees..
slim ankles crossed.. toes curled beneath.
With hands savage as you sink bold
No teasing here, No 'nice and slow' ..
Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust
in blind pleasured mascara~runs.
Piercing's steel ball.. lips full of beg,
moist tickled purr, small claws to legs.
Eyes glance up smooth.. lock Beautiful~
on hard swallow of girthy lull.
'Run flattened tongue to bulging vein,
wet pleas of harder! on Your name.
Soaking my thighs, licking long slides,
palm cups twin's sack.. thickened by glide.
Suck pulling back.. pout rubs swelled tip,
'whisper .."I love you".. (on fierce dip)
you stiff pause then.. as do my licks,
passion alone won't quench my slick..
'Need respect above all of this..
of love.. mayhap you never did.
Awake, now lone ..still unsated,
cursing soul, I'm pining jaded..
Hurts won't heal when 'love~created'..
Mascara runs, un~placated..
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Re. Mascara runs
28th Jul 2015 10:56pm
I hope your dreams come true Darksighs. This one couldn't be hotter. A "silk-wrapped fist" and "lips full of beg" are among many details that set my fevered thoughts going. Your mascara might run but it's a small price to pay. You did a great job with this.
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 2:11am
Sweetest ever, sirs of crow, to see you hear.. pardon the black streaked eyes, will you? (ty)
I am grateful fer the read.. dreams sure can gut punch these days.. especially *these.
appreciate the added hope, shiny eyes just hurt..
hughug
~d
I am grateful fer the read.. dreams sure can gut punch these days.. especially *these.
appreciate the added hope, shiny eyes just hurt..
hughug
~d
Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 00:29am
Wow. Wasn't created babe, I can assure you that. Only some sick self-sabotaging sadist would create something that would cause himself this much pain. As your poetic cadence streamlines more with each write, your words seem to dig that much deeper into the souls of your readers. Cutting words here. Very well done.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 2:25am
we all read into differently so will leave this open to welcome all interps.
when love creates hurts..there should be a magick *reset switch fer those. I'd advocate.
am grateful you see improvement in my verse, ty fer that. We both know it soothes what all else cannot.
take care of yourself Michael,
sweet dreams love,
~T
when love creates hurts..there should be a magick *reset switch fer those. I'd advocate.
am grateful you see improvement in my verse, ty fer that. We both know it soothes what all else cannot.
take care of yourself Michael,
sweet dreams love,
~T
Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 5:04pm
Apologies if I misinterpreted Dark, I get confused when you write poems that make it seem like you've been abandoned when I was right there with you the morning you were writing it. If you hadn't told me the poem was about me, mayhap at I wouldn't have taken it so personal. Still good work.
Michael
Michael
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 8:13pm
stay off my page with hurtful drama laced so sweetly.. I'd appreciate the word abuse to finally stop from you.
I know well what I write about & it's My pain.. not what you see apparently.. but that's fine with me.
best wishes to you Michael.. for what love we had for so long & the peace you cannot honor.
replies shud be only about poetry or critique.
~d
I know well what I write about & it's My pain.. not what you see apparently.. but that's fine with me.
best wishes to you Michael.. for what love we had for so long & the peace you cannot honor.
replies shud be only about poetry or critique.
~d
Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 1:58am
I wish I had something intelligent to say other than the fact
that you are so masterful in creating such sensual imagery.
once again I love to read your ink.
that you are so masterful in creating such sensual imagery.
once again I love to read your ink.
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 2:37am
Grin.. am happy at your presence so no worries there..
ty fer always taking time on me misters, means much & you are amazing for ;)
You got another soggy makeup'ed thx fer the *masterful, them's humblin' words.
dazzlin nites to you poet,
~d
ty fer always taking time on me misters, means much & you are amazing for ;)
You got another soggy makeup'ed thx fer the *masterful, them's humblin' words.
dazzlin nites to you poet,
~d
Re. Mascara runs
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Jul 2015 3:17am
29th Jul 2015 3:13am
intense!!!! yes this is erotica and then some..too bad we can only pick one category!!..the imagery took me for a wild ride...then came the uppercut to the gut
{Suck pulling back.. pout rubs swelled tip,
'whisper .."I love you".. (on fierce dip)
you stiff pause then.. as do my licks,
passion alone won't quench my slick..
'Need respect above all of this..
of love.. mayhap you never did.}
wow!!!..
I just love erotica with a deep sense of emotional and/or mental aspect to them
it's not just about the sex but the 'situation' that surrounds the act..
I'm really feelin this D
yes ma'am
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 8:24pm
Oh, my dear friend.. am so glad you enjoyed.. your intense comment gives this pen of mine more purpose w/such feedback ;)
heartfelt thanx misters, fer seein the emotion laid out (bare) here..
always shine & wishes to you,
everly ~d
heartfelt thanx misters, fer seein the emotion laid out (bare) here..
always shine & wishes to you,
everly ~d
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
29th Jul 2015 3:21am
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 8:33pm
Har-hars m'darlin' Taryn of the Sweets.. no better love~stuff have I ever received!
and still thankin' you for the poetic *pop.. in devious smirks.
this dream surely spun me & I'm glad I got it all down without missing a beat/thrust/lick!
maulin' you wif luvz, my sissy ;)
mwahs
~d
and still thankin' you for the poetic *pop.. in devious smirks.
this dream surely spun me & I'm glad I got it all down without missing a beat/thrust/lick!
maulin' you wif luvz, my sissy ;)
mwahs
~d
Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 3:43am
black liquid sorrow falls from your eyes, & there drips the loneliness & loss. such a bitter yet beautiful cup you drink from...
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 9:47pm
You are ever on the poetic mark, SirJ..and w/pure liquid words. ty.
much appreciate the visit m'dear ;)
curtsies low & fondly,
~d
much appreciate the visit m'dear ;)
curtsies low & fondly,
~d
Re. Mascara runs
" The Mascara Snake is fast & bulbous" Captain Beefheart (Don Van Vliet) from: Trout Mask Replica, 1969
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 9:55pm
and Frank Zappa lives on.. on dup no less! lol..awesome you fer reminding me of the album..
also enjoyed the 3rd in series, "Lick My Decals Off, Baby (1970)!!
great day to you, sweet sirz o D~saxx!
~d
also enjoyed the 3rd in series, "Lick My Decals Off, Baby (1970)!!
great day to you, sweet sirz o D~saxx!
~d
Re. Mascara runs
Anonymous
29th Jul 2015 12:47pm
This poetry is very skillful. What a great mood and atmosphere you set and then change in an instant leaving us wanting and almost wanting to cry with you. Great write.
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 10:15pm
Aww.. much thanx to 'The Circle' I am so fond of after just one read!
I am honored, as poet.. to groove hot & cry hard w/ my fellows ;)
best of days to you's..
fondly, you've made my today w/comment!
~d
I am honored, as poet.. to groove hot & cry hard w/ my fellows ;)
best of days to you's..
fondly, you've made my today w/comment!
~d
Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 2:57pm
D-
Oh my!!!!! Your imagery and creative craft set
free here. My senses went haywire as I read this complex masterpiece.. You are simply nothing short of amazing and just so you know, I can tell you that youve become my muse hands down😚
Oh my!!!!! Your imagery and creative craft set
free here. My senses went haywire as I read this complex masterpiece.. You are simply nothing short of amazing and just so you know, I can tell you that youve become my muse hands down😚
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 10:19pm
The sweetest words EVER... you have a humble friend & fan for life!
I am so touched with smile and hope you have a very blessed day, m'lady ;)
curtsies & well~wishes,
~d
I am so touched with smile and hope you have a very blessed day, m'lady ;)
curtsies & well~wishes,
~d
Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 5:34pm
i've probably gotta consult dr. freud about sudden onset penis envy o.O
*gigglesnorts*
"Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust
in blind pleasured mascara~runs."
^^^^^
money shot lines!!!!!! & not a delicious drop wasted ;)
loveeeeeeeeed this, darlin sighs
me thinks i have said lips full of beg now
xoxox
*gigglesnorts*
"Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust
in blind pleasured mascara~runs."
^^^^^
money shot lines!!!!!! & not a delicious drop wasted ;)
loveeeeeeeeed this, darlin sighs
me thinks i have said lips full of beg now
xoxox
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 10:26pm
Aww sissy.. no envy allowed, you mastercrafter of smutties..twas a good/bad dream that woke me just as needy.. *believe that.. ;)
will spread wishes that all our future mascara runs shall be only in fuckerly hot fashion..
hugs n luvstuffs to my favorite K ever!
mwah
~d
will spread wishes that all our future mascara runs shall be only in fuckerly hot fashion..
hugs n luvstuffs to my favorite K ever!
mwah
~d
Re. Mascara runs
weaver of erotic magic.. I'm in awe of your seductive prowess.. a mighty creamy pen you wield.. I'm with Katja wishing I was endowed with a bulging member to make your dream come true.. creamy and so masterfully crafted.. with love Crim
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
29th Jul 2015 10:33pm
You are adorable, lil ladyCrim & give hothot comment.. 'creamy pen' cud spark a poem all its own I think..
at moment I'm makin due by dream, with soo much appreciation to have you take time on me..
ty sweetly for the smile darlins ;) well wishes,
~d
at moment I'm makin due by dream, with soo much appreciation to have you take time on me..
ty sweetly for the smile darlins ;) well wishes,
~d
Re. Mascara runs
A deep rhythmic flow carries these words down a slope of tears that make dreams taste like nightmares. I know the sadness of this realm and share your hearts despair... jj
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
31st Jul 2015 1:31am
"A deep rhythmic flow carries these words down a slope of tears that make dreams taste like nightmares."
~This?..!! ..luv this gem of a line, JJ! you always have the knack for leavin' me stunning comment, ty ;)
yep, dark does* sigh on the damn longing & despair.. lil grrz. hughug.
be well...'appreciate the read misters!
~d/T
~This?..!! ..luv this gem of a line, JJ! you always have the knack for leavin' me stunning comment, ty ;)
yep, dark does* sigh on the damn longing & despair.. lil grrz. hughug.
be well...'appreciate the read misters!
~d/T
Re. Mascara runs
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2015 5:26pm
30th Jul 2015 5:23pm
How in the world did I miss this? I thought I had it so I would get an update from you when you posted. Yep. I checked and I am following you. Whot happened? Oh well, I am here now. You gotta know I liked this poem. This just sticks out among a multitude of fantastic lines, "Your silk wrapped fist, tugging each thrust," but in my opinion this line is the first shot across the bow. Yes, was about as perfect as a poem could be. No misinterpreting it for sure, but then some people are pros at turning things around. Oh hell yes, this is a "like" poem.
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
31st Jul 2015 1:43am
You are so gawdsbedamned sweet misters! Much thanx fer being so awesome, m'friend.
The Drama~less We, indeed. ..I am a'smirk..& appreciate your time!
best day to you ;)
~d
The Drama~less We, indeed. ..I am a'smirk..& appreciate your time!
best day to you ;)
~d
Re. Mascara runs
31st Jul 2015 3:03pm
Re: Re. Mascara runs
1st Aug 2015 4:53am
Awwes & hugs fer reading my mushy, lusty ..yet messy dream poetry....
I'm everywhere these days, emotions in strong breeze, I s(w)ay.. <~..lol (poem? -jk)
much adores-ment for takin' time on me, sweet sir!
~d
I'm everywhere these days, emotions in strong breeze, I s(w)ay.. <~..lol (poem? -jk)
much adores-ment for takin' time on me, sweet sir!
~d
Re. Mascara runs
2nd Aug 2015 8:06am
This is so wonderful. I am in awe. Ive had tears streaming down my face, him in my throat, used the words, toes curled, purr, clawed in my pieces. I hope to write this expressively someday. 💋
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
2nd Aug 2015 5:41pm
Kiss-kiss to those kinda tears m'dear.. I am so humbled to have you on my page! means so much & I wish we did not need get *there, before finding the truth.. life just IS tho, yes?..sad grrz.. ;)
ty for relating..and for ur time.. best day to you!
~
ty for relating..and for ur time.. best day to you!
~
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
2nd Aug 2015 2:52pm
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Re: Re. Mascara runs
2nd Aug 2015 5:46pm
You deeply honor me, favored poetess.. warm thanx & hughug..for your ever-wise words.
"The ache of unfettered yet unacknowledged, unrequited love and passion"
~such perfect summation, m'lady!
Sweet sniffles to your comment in entirety.. ty..best of days to you ;)
~d
"The ache of unfettered yet unacknowledged, unrequited love and passion"
~such perfect summation, m'lady!
Sweet sniffles to your comment in entirety.. ty..best of days to you ;)
~d