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Must Be An Artist
The dungeon reeks of that old, wet, mustered smell
You know, the mix of rat and the unclean toilet
in the corner.
As the sun rises a shadow, from the steel bars
securing the holes, in the wall, that we call windows
kisses the cold concrete floor.
There is something beautiful in that.
I don’t know what it is, it seems best described
as the perfect canvas; lightly caressed by pastel
to create, a delicate rose.
In that moment, in the moment of absolute despair,
there is beauty.
I believe,
it is only recognised
by an artist.
-x-
A piece I decided to clean up and bring home.
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Re. Must Be An Artist
Ohhh, Alistair, luv ~ :-*
That's quite, quite, achingly lovely. You've touched my heart today, luv.
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28th Jul 2015 7:39am
Thank you Love, it's wonderful receiving comments like that, makes writing theses things well worth it, but more than that, it makes keeping them at DU a pleasure. xxx
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25th Jul 2015 4:48pm
Alistair I'm feeling a bit of despair today.. thank you for painting it so beautiful with your ink and keen artistic eye.. with love Crim
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28th Jul 2015 7:41am
Crim, how refreshing to see you around, I'm sorry you have despair. If ya need to unload, you know where to find me! Love you lots Al -x-
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25th Jul 2015 6:13pm
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28th Jul 2015 7:42am
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25th Jul 2015 6:39pm
I know a friend who hit his rock bottom in a police holding cell.
On the wall, written in what he thought was human feces, was written: "When days are dark, friends are few."
I believe there is an artist inside all of us.
On the wall, written in what he thought was human feces, was written: "When days are dark, friends are few."
I believe there is an artist inside all of us.
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28th Jul 2015 7:44am
Oh goodness Duncan, what an analogy, funny I remember a story like that, dunno you might have brought it up some time back?
Oh yes, the artist is knocking our hearts, just dying for permission to be released!
Thanks for the comment, brought a smile
Oh yes, the artist is knocking our hearts, just dying for permission to be released!
Thanks for the comment, brought a smile
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28th Jul 2015 7:44am
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26th Jul 2015 5:01am
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28th Jul 2015 7:45am
I feel that's the point, John... Look an the shall find Art!
Thanx a million, sir!
Al
Thanx a million, sir!
Al
Re. Must Be An Artist
"There is something beautiful in that."
in this too, without a doubt.
*
i think it was thoreau who said 'the question is not what you look at, but what you see'
... you paint an exquisite chiaroscuro with your words
~ k
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14th Oct 2015 8:12am
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4th Aug 2015 6:15pm
The way of your painting of this piece, led me to smells of rats & a deepeness of the urinal.. something primal. There is intimacy that swells inside of me, when leaning to smell the peeling paint on one the walls & on the other a portrait of the delicate rose
Your description has gifted something intriguing. Love it a lot hun,
Your description has gifted something intriguing. Love it a lot hun,
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14th Oct 2015 8:14am
Oh Hun,
Thank You so much
for being there,
for reading me
and for always
providing
thought provoking commentary.
You add value to my writing.
;)
Thank You so much
for being there,
for reading me
and for always
providing
thought provoking commentary.
You add value to my writing.
;)