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Sailor
Take my broken mind
to the quiet places
sailing the ocean
weathered and beaten by the world
we find solace in each other's arms
the sea balm to our soul
sandy beaches beckon
we walk them nude
unashamed and cleansed
sea spray washes over us
bathing in the salty depths
we are renewed
seeing the world through your eyes
empty ports of pleasure
only a temporary fix
treading lightly I come to you in the night like a whisper
a water sprite dancing on the waters
in your mind's eye captivated
you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so
coming on slowly
then crashing down on me wave after wave
my curvaceous body melds as one with yours
lying in the surf
touching, tasting, loving
no longer lonely
climaxing with the now tumultuous sea
crashing in on each other
crying out in ecstasy
then lulled to sleep by the whispering winds
in your arms I have found my safe harbor
excitement through the adventures that abound by your side
sailing the ocean blue with you I am at home
inspired by Divenire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
For Zazzles instrumental comp.
to the quiet places
sailing the ocean
weathered and beaten by the world
we find solace in each other's arms
the sea balm to our soul
sandy beaches beckon
we walk them nude
unashamed and cleansed
sea spray washes over us
bathing in the salty depths
we are renewed
seeing the world through your eyes
empty ports of pleasure
only a temporary fix
treading lightly I come to you in the night like a whisper
a water sprite dancing on the waters
in your mind's eye captivated
you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so
coming on slowly
then crashing down on me wave after wave
my curvaceous body melds as one with yours
lying in the surf
touching, tasting, loving
no longer lonely
climaxing with the now tumultuous sea
crashing in on each other
crying out in ecstasy
then lulled to sleep by the whispering winds
in your arms I have found my safe harbor
excitement through the adventures that abound by your side
sailing the ocean blue with you I am at home
inspired by Divenire
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qvglWAHDak
For Zazzles instrumental comp.
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Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 1:34am
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22nd Jul 2015 3:40pm
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Re: Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 3:41pm
Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 2:07am
there is such love and passion in this piece and it's my kind of love
'you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so'
so, so beautiful - really deserves and add to my list :-)
'you embrace me not to claim my spirit
but to make passionate love to it
easing my tension as you do so'
so, so beautiful - really deserves and add to my list :-)
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Re: Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 3:42pm
thank you David for such a heart warming comment and add you made my day :) with love Crim
Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 2:24am
swept away on an island of fantasy, there is no place like a nude beach. stunning work, Crim...
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22nd Jul 2015 3:43pm
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Anonymous
22nd Jul 2015 4:52am
Sweet Crim.....seriously.....the pic is beautiful and calming.....along with your gentle sensual peaceful words.....this is awesome.....you're so versatile......RL for me.....gorgeous write....perfect read right before bed......luv and hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 3:44pm
thank you beautiful Flower for such gracious comments touching my heart with love Crim
Re. Sailor
22nd Jul 2015 8:49pm
"I come to you in the night like a whisper." My favorite line here. Makes me want to join the Navy!
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22nd Jul 2015 9:33pm
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23rd Jul 2015 00:25am
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2015 00:35am
Brenda, i'm blown away.. this is a magnificent write.. so brilliantly done.. much love, and respect.. into the list it goes...
Dave
Dave
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23rd Jul 2015 7:16am
thank you Dave you touched my heart with your comments and add with love Brenda
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2015 4:29am
Really beautiful poem. Love the serenity and sense of freedom found within this passionate loving.
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24th Jul 2015 5:33am
Re. Sailor
18th Aug 2015 11:51pm
Dear crimsin: this poem is exquisite ... a fanasty of being nutured, adored and satisfied in the best way by someone who truly cares and love you. ***
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19th Aug 2015 4:36pm