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Dead Eyes
I despise peering into a deceased soul still walking
no longer able to connect on any level
if they do reach in
I'm left with maggots wiggling in my belly
from their dead stare
lobotomized they don't think or care
then there are those whose eyes blaze hot
sparks dance in their gaze
igniting passion inside me
writers have a taste to them
like a fine wine aged well
or a bitter spirit gone bad
the man that captivates me
is a strong liquor
that burns my bosom as I drink him in
tantalizing my palate
titillating the creamy place between my thighs
all the while tickling my imagination
showing me the beloved ocean
through a true sailor's eyes
I know with my heart
he has a honest heated stare
one that would make me wet
with just a glance in my direction
the sea a sacred place he rides
takes me on journeys
I can only dream of
with his honest for real writing
sea salt, hard living, beautiful women
this man fascinates and captivates
I'm sailing your landscapes
escaping with you to foreign ports
I'm living the fantasy
you put the fire back in my dead eyes
no longer able to connect on any level
if they do reach in
I'm left with maggots wiggling in my belly
from their dead stare
lobotomized they don't think or care
then there are those whose eyes blaze hot
sparks dance in their gaze
igniting passion inside me
writers have a taste to them
like a fine wine aged well
or a bitter spirit gone bad
the man that captivates me
is a strong liquor
that burns my bosom as I drink him in
tantalizing my palate
titillating the creamy place between my thighs
all the while tickling my imagination
showing me the beloved ocean
through a true sailor's eyes
I know with my heart
he has a honest heated stare
one that would make me wet
with just a glance in my direction
the sea a sacred place he rides
takes me on journeys
I can only dream of
with his honest for real writing
sea salt, hard living, beautiful women
this man fascinates and captivates
I'm sailing your landscapes
escaping with you to foreign ports
I'm living the fantasy
you put the fire back in my dead eyes
Published 15th Jul 2015
| Edited 16th Jul 2015
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15th Jul 2015 11:43pm
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15th Jul 2015 11:51pm
I've missed you too beautiful Taryn I have some bouts of paranoia but I think the worst of it has passed.. lovely one I've always felt the bright and shining flame in you.. I love you Brenda
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16th Jul 2015 1:05am
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16th Jul 2015 1:19am
16th Jul 2015 1:29am
I've seen the fire in that real writing & you describe it w/your own soaring flames, Crim. beautiful work...
16th Jul 2015 1:49am
thank you John for getting this write and still seeing the flames burning in me with love Crim
16th Jul 2015 1:29am
Wow, this ink absolutely mesmerizing. Incredibly powerful ink, Crim. I, too, have missed you. Welcome back.
16th Jul 2015 1:49am
thank you Sir Hades for such a beautiful comment and embracing me with love Crim
Anonymous
16th Jul 2015 2:05am
Welcome back Crim.....missed you!! This is a great write of luv......can feel your passion for this very fortunate soul......enjoyed xo :)
16th Jul 2015 2:28am
thank you beautiful Flower though just a one sided poetic crush he does ignite my passion :) with love Crim
16th Jul 2015 5:54am
Ahhh, crimsin, luv ~ :-*
An ensorcelling devil of a man with tales of the sea and the far gaze in his eyes... ;-*
Your description is apt and your passion glorious to behold. You're an exquisite poet, luv, sagacious, insightful, a rare flower. :-*
An ensorcelling devil of a man with tales of the sea and the far gaze in his eyes... ;-*
Your description is apt and your passion glorious to behold. You're an exquisite poet, luv, sagacious, insightful, a rare flower. :-*
16th Jul 2015 6:11am
beautiful lady you touched my heart greatly with your ever so lovely comment thank you.. you are a gem of a woman with love Crimsin
16th Jul 2015 8:30am
So nice to see you write of these types of feelings..
It's good to see you happy...
loves you Brenda, glad ur writing again..
love Zazzles xoxoxo
It's good to see you happy...
loves you Brenda, glad ur writing again..
love Zazzles xoxoxo
16th Jul 2015 9:04pm
16th Jul 2015 6:14pm
The eyes have it. This is eroticism with a sense of adventure. My baby blues blaze just from reading this, but it's always lovely to see you Crim!
16th Jul 2015 9:06pm
16th Jul 2015 7:29pm
I just spent 6 weeks morphined up to the eyeballs after my amputation. I experienced dead eyes for sure. The flame / sparks are returning
I really connected with this beautiful piece - I have missed you and your poetry so much and this excellent piece shows why :-)
I really connected with this beautiful piece - I have missed you and your poetry so much and this excellent piece shows why :-)
16th Jul 2015 9:08pm
sorry to hear you went through something so devastating David sending love your way.. I'm happy your flames are returning thank you for connecting with this ink with love Brenda
10th Aug 2015 4:42pm
This poem is not needy or wondering she is full of confidence and proud of her needs and herself. A man must be strong and strong as the words the poets puts on paper,
10th Aug 2015 5:02pm
thank you beautiful you're so right I never looked it like that..
with love Crim
with love Crim
