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Teardrops
They fall from my eyes
Into the shadows of fantasies
As it travels its way
Onto my cheeks
Both tears rest comfortably
With my nose centered in the sternum
With a squeeze from the outside
Light gives way for pillowy darkness
A death I could endure with a smile
Into the shadows of fantasies
As it travels its way
Onto my cheeks
Both tears rest comfortably
With my nose centered in the sternum
With a squeeze from the outside
Light gives way for pillowy darkness
A death I could endure with a smile
Published 13th Jul 2015
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13th Jul 2015 4:59pm
14th Jul 2015 8:08pm
13th Jul 2015 6:06pm
"A death I could endure with a smile." Love that line! Fine work even if there's crying involved. The laughs will come later.
14th Jul 2015 8:08pm
I am flattered to hear you say this, Crow! But I assure, those are tears of joy!
13th Jul 2015 7:06pm
14th Jul 2015 8:09pm
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13th Jul 2015 8:30pm
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14th Jul 2015 8:09pm
:DDDDD Heehee. I am glad this put a big smile on your face. I am sure it lights up a room. Thanks for the read and comment Taryn.
16th Jul 2015 5:09am
Forgot to say, the last line was wonderful.
A death I could endure with a smile. 💋💛
A death I could endure with a smile. 💋💛
16th Jul 2015 6:41pm
17th Jul 2015 4:48am
17th Jul 2015 3:16pm
An alternative title would have been "Motorboat", but I was more at describing their shape.
18th Jul 2015 4:45am
you must be a savage fucker
all gals must be lined up
for a turn once with you
to know what savage fuckers
can fucking well do
did u ever read this/ i wonder
all gals must be lined up
for a turn once with you
to know what savage fuckers
can fucking well do
did u ever read this/ i wonder
18th Jul 2015 12:42pm
Some see me as a savage
While others want to be ravaged
It's still one at a time for me
To devote all my energy
And you will know when you are ready
If you like it hard or you like it steady
While others want to be ravaged
It's still one at a time for me
To devote all my energy
And you will know when you are ready
If you like it hard or you like it steady
28th Aug 2017 6:16pm
5th Aug 2015 5:13am
Pillowy darkness. Not just what billows and sparks within us. Something to rest upon. That's the best smile to be kept, I reckon.
5th Aug 2015 2:12pm
Indeed, my friend. One that comforts us where we don't need to use our eyes.
