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More and more (a love poem)
For CY
Last night
Separated by miles
Separated by circumstance
Together in so much more
You
Lying in another woman's arms
Betwixt her thighs
Sampling her delights
I
Without you physically
Yet replete
Complete
Assured of your love
How odd life is
Fraught with twists
And funny little sideways
Meanderings
Our love
Fulfills me
On a level
I never thought
Possible
I never dreamed
Such total honesty
Complete communication
And trust
I love thee
More and more
With each day that passes
I find
My soul
Complete
Replete
With you...
Last night
Separated by miles
Separated by circumstance
Together in so much more
You
Lying in another woman's arms
Betwixt her thighs
Sampling her delights
I
Without you physically
Yet replete
Complete
Assured of your love
How odd life is
Fraught with twists
And funny little sideways
Meanderings
Our love
Fulfills me
On a level
I never thought
Possible
I never dreamed
Such total honesty
Complete communication
And trust
I love thee
More and more
With each day that passes
I find
My soul
Complete
Replete
With you...
Published 12th Jul 2015
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12th Jul 2015 3:02pm
Feel this
Yet in my case, doesn't feel as good, though it used to ...
Be careful with your heart is my only advice ...
Cautious Like
Yet in my case, doesn't feel as good, though it used to ...
Be careful with your heart is my only advice ...
Cautious Like
12th Jul 2015 6:49pm
Thank you, Granite, luv ~ :-*
I'll keep your words in mind. I originally wrote this in February, but this isn't my first or only experience with an open relationship. I find communication crucial. ;-p
Tis wisdom you speak, though methinks the nature of love oft-times belies wariness... :-*
Thank you, luv, again for your sage words.
I'll keep your words in mind. I originally wrote this in February, but this isn't my first or only experience with an open relationship. I find communication crucial. ;-p
Tis wisdom you speak, though methinks the nature of love oft-times belies wariness... :-*
Thank you, luv, again for your sage words.
12th Jul 2015 5:00pm
Long distance love is tough enough, not to mention often more fleeting than when in each others arms, but when ones arms are empty, filling the heart has few option left to embrace. Still, you are vulnerable from afar in this affair, so take care of yourself and protect your heart! JJ
12th Jul 2015 7:05pm
Ahhh, Poetryman, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so for your words of care and concern and wisdom. I will endeavor to be careful, though love is oft-times a challenger to that very carefulness. ;-p
I have been in this relationship now for two years, luv, and we communicate thoroughly and well thus far. :-* We'll see what the future holds. I will keep your words in mind, though, as you intrinsically contain more insight into men than I. Therefore, I will always have more to learn... ;-*
Thank you, luv, again. :-*
Thank you so for your words of care and concern and wisdom. I will endeavor to be careful, though love is oft-times a challenger to that very carefulness. ;-p
I have been in this relationship now for two years, luv, and we communicate thoroughly and well thus far. :-* We'll see what the future holds. I will keep your words in mind, though, as you intrinsically contain more insight into men than I. Therefore, I will always have more to learn... ;-*
Thank you, luv, again. :-*
12th Jul 2015 7:03pm
Distance doesn't have to be an insurmountable obstacle, as you so wisely point out. You seem to take his "lying in another woman's arms" with equanimity. Allowances might have to be made. It does sound as if you do indeed have complete communication and trust. If you have that you have it all. Excellent work Savaja.
12th Jul 2015 7:43pm
Thank you, crowfly, luv. :-*
If we did not have complete communication and trust, we would not be able to truly share each other. :-*
Thank you, again, luv. :-*
If we did not have complete communication and trust, we would not be able to truly share each other. :-*
Thank you, again, luv. :-*
12th Jul 2015 7:50pm
You're obeying nature's dictum and that is good: variety, no jealousy, total submission to whims of feeling and emotions. Even though you're relatively still young, you're amassing the wisdom of an aged crone.
Thank you very much, candycrier, luv. :-*
You gift me mightily with your words and I am nigh speechless. I am humbled indeed, luv. :-*
Thank you so very much.
You gift me mightily with your words and I am nigh speechless. I am humbled indeed, luv. :-*
Thank you so very much.
12th Jul 2015 11:14pm
It takes a more flexible mind to understand what you are saying here, miss. Early and continual communication is a must. Trust a must. It's good that you seem not to want to possess 'all' of your lover, but enough to keep you satisfied and interested.
13th Jul 2015 2:53am
Thank you, hawkdude, luv. :-*
You are accurate in your assessment that early and continual communication as well as trust are musts.
Tis difficult indeed to possess another being who is free like me; better methinks for us to share ourselves with each other as we please... ;-*
Thank you, luv, for your immense understanding. :-*
You are accurate in your assessment that early and continual communication as well as trust are musts.
Tis difficult indeed to possess another being who is free like me; better methinks for us to share ourselves with each other as we please... ;-*
Thank you, luv, for your immense understanding. :-*
I am detecting an attitude not unlike the way George Harrison felt when Eric Clapton confessed he was in love with his wife. The connection goes beyond just physical so the temptation to be threatened by another's presence is limited. At least that was my reading of why their friendship endured. In this case the connection between you two isn't subjected to jealously?
13th Jul 2015 7:45pm
JAZZMANOR, luv ~ :-*
Because we are human, there is always the possibility of jealousy. ;-p However, luv, this potentiality is ameliorated by complete communication and trust. I know where I stand with him and he with me. Because we have that and maintain that, jealousy is a non-issue.
I believe jealousy is caused by insecurity. Eliminate insecurity, jealousy will follow. :-*
So, no, our connection is not subject to jealousy because we communicate and trust and love and banish insecurity, luv.
Because we are human, there is always the possibility of jealousy. ;-p However, luv, this potentiality is ameliorated by complete communication and trust. I know where I stand with him and he with me. Because we have that and maintain that, jealousy is a non-issue.
I believe jealousy is caused by insecurity. Eliminate insecurity, jealousy will follow. :-*
So, no, our connection is not subject to jealousy because we communicate and trust and love and banish insecurity, luv.
13th Jul 2015 3:38am
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13th Jul 2015 5:18am
loved this in the competition.. i do think that it was better than the one that won...
and way better than the ones i flooded it with...
and way better than the ones i flooded it with...
13th Jul 2015 8:56pm
Thank you very much, HHMCameron, luv. :-*
Tis very sweet of you to say, and glad I am that you found such merit within that it touched your heart, luv. :-*
You give me far too much credit, though. :-p
There was great merit to be found in the winning entry and that as well as intense poignance in your entries... :-*
Tis very sweet of you to say, and glad I am that you found such merit within that it touched your heart, luv. :-*
You give me far too much credit, though. :-p
There was great merit to be found in the winning entry and that as well as intense poignance in your entries... :-*
13th Jul 2015 4:29pm
13th Jul 2015 9:09pm
Ahhh, DadaDoggyDannyKozakSaxfn, luv ~ :-*
And, I - yes me, wish for thee to be happy and free no matter where life takes you. See? ;-*
You are incredibly sweet and deserve the best of life, luv.
And, I - yes me, wish for thee to be happy and free no matter where life takes you. See? ;-*
You are incredibly sweet and deserve the best of life, luv.
14th Jul 2015 4:21am
I like the divergent view in this, sex not needing to be restricted to love. we are allowed so few pleasures in life, how do we resist it when it's offered? & why must we be outcast by the one we love for savoring it?...
14th Jul 2015 7:20am
Indeed, JohnFeddeler, luv, indeed. :-*
These questions become moot in a relationship as this. And, further, there are opportunities for the relationship to grow and become even closer, for instance, when experiences are shared... ;-*
These questions become moot in a relationship as this. And, further, there are opportunities for the relationship to grow and become even closer, for instance, when experiences are shared... ;-*
16th Jul 2015 9:34pm
"Such total honesty
Complete communication
And trust "
~strong, confident You!
this is beautiful thought Lady*S, that I luvz..
feel u on the mile-aches of distance & think it
wonderful that ur fulfillment can be embraced this way!
*kisskiss m'darlin, this is an emotion-chalked write.
~d
Complete communication
And trust "
~strong, confident You!
this is beautiful thought Lady*S, that I luvz..
feel u on the mile-aches of distance & think it
wonderful that ur fulfillment can be embraced this way!
*kisskiss m'darlin, this is an emotion-chalked write.
~d
24th Jul 2015 9:12am
Thank you, darksighs, luv. :-*
I am glad some portion of this thought resonated with you, even if tis not a philosophy you'd embrace. :-* I rather adore that you are able to see the beauty in it for me.
Your recognition of the depth of emotion here is wondrous as well. Thank you, luv. :-*
I am glad some portion of this thought resonated with you, even if tis not a philosophy you'd embrace. :-* I rather adore that you are able to see the beauty in it for me.
Your recognition of the depth of emotion here is wondrous as well. Thank you, luv. :-*
Anonymous
25th Jul 2015 4:51am
Savaja.....there are times when a distant relationship can be more intimate than one that is near......words shared feel as if there is no ocean between two souls or whatever the distance may be......luv this.....xo :)
30th Jul 2015 4:06am
you speak beautifully straight from the heart in this piece Savaja... priceless and real
