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get out of my head...
she whispered in my ear and
however she got in there I'm
just pleased she kept it quiet...
Published 7th Jul 2015
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8th Jul 2015 1:12am
It's like a song, isn't it? Nice to see you back, Paul. Been worried about you.
8th Jul 2015 1:40am
that's good of you, thanks, I've just
been having problems concentrating
lately - and since my poems are
fairly concentrated, I thought I'd keep
away rather than simply dilute them..:)
been having problems concentrating
lately - and since my poems are
fairly concentrated, I thought I'd keep
away rather than simply dilute them..:)
8th Jul 2015 1:50am
8th Jul 2015 3:23am
8th Jul 2015 11:53am
it's when she starts hanging up
the pictures in my mind,
that's when I know she's really
moved in...
the pictures in my mind,
that's when I know she's really
moved in...
Anonymous
8th Jul 2015 6:35am
Again, Silence is Golden. . .rather she whispered then yelled. . .there's too many women out there that just yell and yell and yell. . .
8th Jul 2015 11:55am
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8th Jul 2015 5:43pm
I imagine...that would be a frightening place to take up residence. A constant sphere of riddles and absolute confusion.
8th Jul 2015 7:31pm
10th Jul 2015 1:15pm
A quiet woman - now there's and unusual concept
still I would want to consider sound proofing just in case :p
still I would want to consider sound proofing just in case :p
10th Jul 2015 2:03pm
