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my drug
I saved your picture
to my phone
so when i'm here
and all alone
i can look at it
and think about
the precious moments
that we shared
when i was sure
you really cared
life changes people
and sometimes things
but nothing ever has
come between
my feelings for you
nor my needs
just like a drug
you took hold of me
never again
will i be free
to my phone
so when i'm here
and all alone
i can look at it
and think about
the precious moments
that we shared
when i was sure
you really cared
life changes people
and sometimes things
but nothing ever has
come between
my feelings for you
nor my needs
just like a drug
you took hold of me
never again
will i be free
Published 7th Jul 2015
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7th Jul 2015 3:19am
just like a drug
you took hold of me
never again
will i be free ...
I've often thought the same of my Lena ...
... Great lines within a lovely tome
you took hold of me
never again
will i be free ...
I've often thought the same of my Lena ...
... Great lines within a lovely tome
7th Jul 2015 3:28am
7th Jul 2015 3:21am
Sometimes it takes another drug to break the original addiction. Your expression of obsession is quite relatable... jj
7th Jul 2015 3:30am
7th Jul 2015 4:36am
7th Jul 2015 4:38am
Aaah Hello Miss Faith
Thank you for putting this wonderful read here. It is beautifully emotive, and the personification (for the want of a better way to describe it) is spot on....
I've felt addiction like that, I've lived the withdrawal too and the dealers...
I truly related to your wonderful piece ma'am
Love
Al -x-
Thank you for putting this wonderful read here. It is beautifully emotive, and the personification (for the want of a better way to describe it) is spot on....
I've felt addiction like that, I've lived the withdrawal too and the dealers...
I truly related to your wonderful piece ma'am
Love
Al -x-
7th Jul 2015 6:11pm
Dearest Al-Thank you for dropping by and reading my poem. Your response made my day. I am glad you enjoyed it
XO Faith
XO Faith
Anonymous
7th Jul 2015 10:36pm
Sweet Faith...this is brilliant......it's great how much another soul can affect us when they enter our lives......good to see you back and read you again......luv and hugs xo :)
8th Jul 2015 1:50am
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, dear lady. You made my heart smile big time
Love-Faith
Love-Faith
8th Jul 2015 5:51pm
9th Jul 2015 2:39am
28th Jun 2016 10:10am
Your rhythm n rhyme, perfectly flow
in time, spilled by ink, the emotions felt leavin' one no choice but to think. ;)
in time, spilled by ink, the emotions felt leavin' one no choice but to think. ;)
28th Jun 2016 12:48pm
