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Dueling Recollection
I miss the warm slip of your lips
that one-fingered chin tilt to mouth.
Your smooth licks gaining entry,
to press of flesh on kissed pout.
Firm palms in tease at my spine
bold mesh of tongues dueling rights,
My arch into, nibbling your neck
moist whisper trail, a tipped caress.
The look you'd give, mirroring mine
my pierced licks, of brandied wine.
Fired savor of wet slip..slide..glide
probing soul, 'tween two strong minds.
Being held fiercely, as shiny with worth
Miss it all, and 'that part' hurts the worst.
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Re: Dueling Recollection
6th Jul 2015 1:22am
Very empty felling, put into words as a true poet, an immaculate write dark. Very good.
Good feelings to you dark.
Good feelings to you dark.
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re: Re: Dueling Recollection
6th Jul 2015 6:28am
You are so awesome fer the saying, mister poet/songwriter!!
Always appreciate your sweet words & drop in.
good vibes to you,
~d
Always appreciate your sweet words & drop in.
good vibes to you,
~d
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6th Jul 2015 6:38am
Re: Dueling Recollection
6th Jul 2015 1:31am
Miss it all, and 'that part' hurts the worst.
Awww. That last line evokes so much emotion. xo
Awww. That last line evokes so much emotion. xo
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6th Jul 2015 1:37am
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6th Jul 2015 7:16am
Thanx to you, dear Ahavati!
I am grateful fer your time, every-time!
blessings,
~d
I am grateful fer your time, every-time!
blessings,
~d
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6th Jul 2015 7:14am
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"I 'member yep-yeps".. she sez.. *head dwn, toe in the sand.. *the lip pout..
gotta ty fer being sooo amazin' Sweet Taryn.. gotta
long road ahead, I just know my irish un-luckees!
luvz on you, infinity times sumthen else, m'sis ;)
~d
gotta ty fer being sooo amazin' Sweet Taryn.. gotta
long road ahead, I just know my irish un-luckees!
luvz on you, infinity times sumthen else, m'sis ;)
~d
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6th Jul 2015 7:55am
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8th Jul 2015 8:16am
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8th Jul 2015 8:23am
O'my dearest.. we shall morning'it over the miles
any/every day, misters D-saxx(2nd dubbs, like t' 1st)..
sending you sweet smiles fer reading my snivels of passion hun, ty!
~d
any/every day, misters D-saxx(2nd dubbs, like t' 1st)..
sending you sweet smiles fer reading my snivels of passion hun, ty!
~d
Re: Dueling Recollection
8th Jul 2015 8:05am
taryn makes me wanna cum, you make me wanna cry... emotional clusterfuck this mornin o.O
the weeping has won out...
"Being held fiercely, as shiny with worth"
^^^^
lawd you broke my heart right there...
... they take something with them, don't they [?] like you lose the parts of yourself they loved most, like those pieces never really belonged to you, like they don't belong without them
*sigh*
ah fecking hell, pass the kleenex, would ya [?]
the weeping has won out...
"Being held fiercely, as shiny with worth"
^^^^
lawd you broke my heart right there...
... they take something with them, don't they [?] like you lose the parts of yourself they loved most, like those pieces never really belonged to you, like they don't belong without them
*sigh*
ah fecking hell, pass the kleenex, would ya [?]
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8th Jul 2015 8:29am
rofl's seester of the cum'n'criers <~ band name?
lmsao..
dark~unholy grins, did I ever miss ur bold lil
self spreadin' sparkled magicks round here!
yes,yes, and yes.. to you on those, & we only hope
fer those 'maybe' touches frm there on out..
luvzu & cuervo tippin w/kleenex(need both, pals y'know)
~d
lmsao..
dark~unholy grins, did I ever miss ur bold lil
self spreadin' sparkled magicks round here!
yes,yes, and yes.. to you on those, & we only hope
fer those 'maybe' touches frm there on out..
luvzu & cuervo tippin w/kleenex(need both, pals y'know)
~d