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The collar
He held me tight
against our wall scuffed from fingernails
And stiletto heels.
And he said, "I have a gift for my little."
He drew from his pocket a black leather collar
I became wet between my legs.
I knew something irreversible was beginning that had no end.
I had not truly known what I was before, but as
he put that collar around my neck he pushed his hand between my thighs into my wetness
and whispered,
"You are mine now." Without question, as there was none, I gave him me.
It was not confining, the collar, no it bound us together by soul.
From somewhere deeper in him than I knew existed he growled,
and I dropped to kneel before him
showing him the yielding sweetness of me.
Honoring him because without the pain he had shown me
I'd have never known true ecstasy.
against our wall scuffed from fingernails
And stiletto heels.
And he said, "I have a gift for my little."
He drew from his pocket a black leather collar
I became wet between my legs.
I knew something irreversible was beginning that had no end.
I had not truly known what I was before, but as
he put that collar around my neck he pushed his hand between my thighs into my wetness
and whispered,
"You are mine now." Without question, as there was none, I gave him me.
It was not confining, the collar, no it bound us together by soul.
From somewhere deeper in him than I knew existed he growled,
and I dropped to kneel before him
showing him the yielding sweetness of me.
Honoring him because without the pain he had shown me
I'd have never known true ecstasy.
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 27th Jun 2015
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Re: The collar
27th Jun 2015 7:51am
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27th Jun 2015 11:53am
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27th Jun 2015 9:22am
Mmmmmm my goodness, something bout how u
instantly got wet made my mouth water! lol
That lucky Son of #!*%+!?!! lol
instantly got wet made my mouth water! lol
That lucky Son of #!*%+!?!! lol
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re: Re: The collar
27th Jun 2015 11:52am
Lol I was pretty lucky too. Thank you. I still want to trade art somehow. There's an error on my email I don't understand. I'll.get it fixed somehow.
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29th Jun 2015 8:29am
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12th Jul 2015 6:04pm
Sweet submission, & you give it with sexy style
here! ..purrfect build up.
great read lady..
dark-shiny days to u ;)
~d
here! ..purrfect build up.
great read lady..
dark-shiny days to u ;)
~d
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13th Jul 2015 3:16am
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12th Jul 2015 6:25pm
Mmm, the intensity of this is flavorable,
I love how you cherish what is given
internally & spiritually.
I love how you cherish what is given
internally & spiritually.
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13th Jul 2015 3:18am
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13th Jul 2015 3:44am
when one views such a situation as merely about control and pain, another dimension is completely missed
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13th Jul 2015 5:02am
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13th Jul 2015 5:44am
I wasn't really talking about you, I was referring to someone who might be reading your work. Quite apparent that you didn't miss anything.
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13th Jul 2015 5:52am
Thank you. And I thought so. I hope you'll take the time to read Sound. I appreciate your insight.
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13th Jul 2015 7:09am
Good grief, Jennifer, My my my you are a fine talent...
I was pleasantly surprised by the innocence and beauty that is this poem..
Thanks for sharing..
Zazzles ")
I was pleasantly surprised by the innocence and beauty that is this poem..
Thanks for sharing..
Zazzles ")
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13th Jul 2015 7:38am
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13th Jul 2015 8:12am
Emmmmmm,that wetness, the mayne, that moment and this erotica...
Nice ink
BrrrrrHhhhhh
Nice ink
BrrrrrHhhhhh
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15th Jul 2015 3:29am
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15th Jul 2015 3:33am
Collar me red
15th Jul 2015 4:41pm
I live your themes of ownership and control. With just the right set up to know how things will play itself out. Another erotic thrill calamity!
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Anonymous
4th Aug 2015 6:23am
Jennifer, I was drawn to this after looking through your work and there's such underlying vulnerability and yet strength, reminding me of some quote or another i've read before, "i'm giving you the power to hurt me, and trusting that you don't'. Pain and pleasure, have the same strength the way we experience the emotion.
Well written piece, nicely done.
Well written piece, nicely done.
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4th Aug 2015 6:53am
Thank you so much, and yes, the quote resonates with me. There are very many reasons submission apeals to me, all theraputic. I have been hurt, taken. There is freedom in giving. 💋
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16th Aug 2015 00:13am
This hot poem of yours is a very tasty treat. Each line is in love with the next.
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