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surrender
Comfort feels alien
Ian lost from that place
I hold my heart
But not in body
My thoughts spin out to space
I cry God
Sing him loud
And I find my breathe like a breeze
I surrender to God
Give him self will
And all fear
Soon I know I find peace
Ian lost from that place
I hold my heart
But not in body
My thoughts spin out to space
I cry God
Sing him loud
And I find my breathe like a breeze
I surrender to God
Give him self will
And all fear
Soon I know I find peace
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 26th Jun 2015
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27th Jun 2015 00:32am
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Re: surrender
27th Jun 2015 1:31am
Good. I'm a recovering addict and alcoholic, it talks about the time in my life I surrendered to my higher power and asked him to relieve me of my suffering.
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27th Jun 2015 7:53am
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13th Jul 2015 7:11am
Beautiful... Your ink is stunning Jennifer..
Welcome to Dup!
consider yourself followed!
Great piece I enjoyed...
Zazzles ")
Welcome to Dup!
consider yourself followed!
Great piece I enjoyed...
Zazzles ")
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13th Jul 2015 4:46pm
Thank you. This poem is very personal to me. I appreciate you taking time to read it.
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14th Jul 2015 9:28pm
This some how allows me to realize how my mother felt, she used to be an addict. She's been through a lot, and what little words are here, explains almost all of it.
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14th Jul 2015 11:32pm
This may be the best compliment I've received here. I have a son, its important to me he knows my alcoholic and addictive mind is diseased, but if you surrender to something higher than yourself, recovery can begin. I will say a prayer for you and your family tonight. God bless
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14th Jul 2015 11:36pm
Most of my work is erotica. Its kismet you chose to read the only poem I have on here dealing with addiction. If you ever need to talk, I'm here. 💋
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15th Jul 2015 3:51am
Good to know. Look forward to seeing more of your work like this. I myself have been through a lot, and have witnessed even more. I love reading things that can truly express things that I cannot.
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15th Jul 2015 4:15am
Thanks, but I have a feeling you'll find it in yourself the ability to express anything you need to. ,💋
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4th Aug 2015 3:14am
one of those times when we get on our knees, & somehow it's comforting. we probably don't do it often enough...
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4th Aug 2015 3:47am
Absolutely John. I hope its okay i addrress you as such. Before I only prayed when i was hurting, needed something. Since then its been important to me to make prayer and meditation the beginning to my day. And the ending. To be grateful always, even if its just for the breathe i can take. I was at a point in my life, i was uncertain how many i had left in me. Thank you always for your words, i hope you are well, i have read the last of uour pieces and it seems your going through something. Bless you. 💋
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3rd Mar 2024 7:43am
On the themes of drugs and addiction, it’s a tough but a very powerful honest spill
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