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exist
all of him that was inside me
every part of him
is gone
the rage of twenty two years
hard exploding years
flows through me
abandon what i was
was nothing much
but a thing
his thing
nothing
the roots of my heart dug up
an end to pain
torturing wordless pain
no shadow for my bones
blue bones unfolded
and I'll exist
in my skin
for me
only for me
every part of him
is gone
the rage of twenty two years
hard exploding years
flows through me
abandon what i was
was nothing much
but a thing
his thing
nothing
the roots of my heart dug up
an end to pain
torturing wordless pain
no shadow for my bones
blue bones unfolded
and I'll exist
in my skin
for me
only for me
Published 26th Jun 2015
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26th Jun 2015 6:26pm
No woman is an island, Tommie, but I understand the need to retreat for a while. I notice that the "e" in your title is lower case, so the existence might be one of pain and contemplation. I just hope it doesn't go on forever. You do have to keep plenty of distance for yourself, but others can be included eventually, hopefully. I love this. It contains sadness but a great deal of power.
27th Jun 2015 7:42pm
I was hoping the reader would feel the power with the sadness. Relationships are never easy,and most of the time tough as hell as we all know. I need to start living for me now! Thank you so much crowfly for your wonderful comment and reading me. :)
26th Jun 2015 8:06pm
It is a sad thing when love fades. I hope th at you can be with someone with whom love grows rather than diminishes. This is a sad, beautifully written piece. Brava Tommie.
27th Jun 2015 7:44pm
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29th Jun 2015 2:38am
Always appreciate you reading me
and your comments Poet!
It's such a sad feeling,hope it gets better
for you my friend. :)
and your comments Poet!
It's such a sad feeling,hope it gets better
for you my friend. :)
27th Jun 2015 11:00pm
This is a tough one to comment on, I can only think about how sad it is to merely exist.
but you'll return to living joyfully soon, Tommie...
but you'll return to living joyfully soon, Tommie...
29th Jun 2015 2:41am
