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As Lace drapes Night
As lace drapes night,
I wanna feel you
..heavy-lying,
probing surface-hard
to tuck throbs
within
my thighs ..of open intent.
You enter slooow..
spread me far and wide
in personal smiles
of moist gliss' in kiss.
A never ending stroke
of raw tight need
parted smooth
in teary plea..
For you,
"Finish with me."
Panting out to let you in
..Closer
with every stretch
of Beautiful..
In our scent igniting.
Aches of heavy
become Light
as my Lace
drapes your Night.
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Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 9:39am
there's an erotic conspiracy going on, isn't there [?] lawd jaysus this is just hawt hawt hawt!!!!!!
"to tuck throbs
within
my thighs ..of open intent."
&
"Closer
with every stretch
of Beautiful"
... have me all purrrring over here as you raise the temperature, darling sighs
loveeeee love loved this!
xo
~k
"to tuck throbs
within
my thighs ..of open intent."
&
"Closer
with every stretch
of Beautiful"
... have me all purrrring over here as you raise the temperature, darling sighs
loveeeee love loved this!
xo
~k
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
*by power of hypnotic charm*.. yes, we plan devilish thingz wif u dolz! us t&t's are draggin'
you out to play..n soon.. <~foreshadow *stm
Your warm kitten magicks are melodious to mine ears, every. lil. purrz.
m'thanks of you, sweet stuf!
~d
you out to play..n soon.. <~foreshadow *stm
Your warm kitten magicks are melodious to mine ears, every. lil. purrz.
m'thanks of you, sweet stuf!
~d
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25th Jun 2015 10:41pm
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re: re: re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
26th Jun 2015 5:09am
naughty lmao's Taryn..we can't sneak in wif all this laughin' goin' on.. (im tryin' to shush, really)
funny ladies, y'both make my day a glorious grin..
nooow the excited cackles may *erupt..
chanting monotones,
~d
funny ladies, y'both make my day a glorious grin..
nooow the excited cackles may *erupt..
chanting monotones,
~d
re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 4:57pm
Exceptional that you stopped in misterz, I'm always so grateful fer the read!
hv great hrs today poet ;)
~d
hv great hrs today poet ;)
~d
Re: As Lace drapes Night
Please please please change the "u" to you in the fourth stanza! I feel like I'm reading a passioned interlude and somehow a text message interrupted. 📱
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 5:01pm
ha!..And this is why I love seein you here..
give it to me straightly wif ur lovely eyes of
poetess ahawkin'..grins
& last nites sleepy eyes thk you too ;)
be ever well!
~d
give it to me straightly wif ur lovely eyes of
poetess ahawkin'..grins
& last nites sleepy eyes thk you too ;)
be ever well!
~d
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25th Jun 2015 1:40pm
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 5:10pm
oooh..kudos to ur stifled burn.. will get you yet my pretty..(& wicked witch of west-type cackle)
*somethin's in the air Sweet Taryn,& may I survive
the spark & boiling point, sez me! winx
we will drag miss third part around soon, keep writin, I think she's comin round! fits of lmao.
n luv alwys to you fer all (ty)
~d
*somethin's in the air Sweet Taryn,& may I survive
the spark & boiling point, sez me! winx
we will drag miss third part around soon, keep writin, I think she's comin round! fits of lmao.
n luv alwys to you fer all (ty)
~d
re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 5:15pm
Sweet Lady, I give you my most humble thank-u's!
A pleasure truly, & I will hope to read you soon..
in warm curtsies,
~d
A pleasure truly, & I will hope to read you soon..
in warm curtsies,
~d
Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 5:37pm
re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
25th Jun 2015 7:23pm
M'dear Sirz.. a fact'o simile alone suffices frm you.. let alone a bonafide pronoun! *wows
too sweet you are!
always fuzzy thanx fer readin thru m'fitzen misterz ;)
~d
too sweet you are!
always fuzzy thanx fer readin thru m'fitzen misterz ;)
~d
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
26th Jun 2015 4:55am
soft probing?.. (she sez) ..what 'bout that?
my innocent-feign is broken luv, so ur just gonna
needs deal wif the burn of me I s'pose..
in everloving fit, my baby..tyty
~T
my innocent-feign is broken luv, so ur just gonna
needs deal wif the burn of me I s'pose..
in everloving fit, my baby..tyty
~T
Re: As Lace drapes Night
Anonymous
26th Jun 2015 2:45am
I am loving a lot of 'lace' lately and yours is no exception. Tantalizing scripts are making it hard, for me to stand up with people in the room. But I thank you for that pleasure nevertheless;)
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
26th Jun 2015 5:04am
Too damn coolz of you to stop in 'misterz of slowO'
rofls.. yep, lace must be in season m'thinks!
or lack off, er..different maybe. luvd ur petsy
one w/ the luscious voice of ladyS..be commenting
soon & u will *totally get my delay.
lottsa table-bonkin goin on round dup today. I'm
blaming the air ..(safe bet)
be well poet, adores seein you here & will be
'round ur way shortly..
~d
rofls.. yep, lace must be in season m'thinks!
or lack off, er..different maybe. luvd ur petsy
one w/ the luscious voice of ladyS..be commenting
soon & u will *totally get my delay.
lottsa table-bonkin goin on round dup today. I'm
blaming the air ..(safe bet)
be well poet, adores seein you here & will be
'round ur way shortly..
~d
Re: As Lace drapes Night
29th Jun 2015 7:03pm
Captivating.... you can see the whole things with every line, made me want more
this is great...
this is great...
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re: Re: As Lace drapes Night
29th Jun 2015 7:26pm
So amazin to have you here, tyty!
I will be catching back up on reads tonight, see you's there!
hv great hours misterz,
~d
I will be catching back up on reads tonight, see you's there!
hv great hours misterz,
~d