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Healing
there,
in the deepest beauty,
in no way my mind
could make sense of the feeling,
or the simplistic nature of light
in the beautiful starfish
under the water;
we were carried there together.
Photography, by
Daniel Kozak Wozny
in the deepest beauty,
in no way my mind
could make sense of the feeling,
or the simplistic nature of light
in the beautiful starfish
under the water;
we were carried there together.
Photography, by
Daniel Kozak Wozny
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Re: Healing
17th Jun 2015 2:20pm
am most flattered.
your poem is most graceful in it's brevity.
bless ye, dear
D'Kozak'W
your poem is most graceful in it's brevity.
bless ye, dear
D'Kozak'W
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re: Re: Healing
18th Jun 2015 6:40am
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18th Jun 2015 6:43am
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17th Jun 2015 8:47pm
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18th Jun 2015 6:46am
Re: Healing
18th Jun 2015 00:08am
loves you and your beautiful mind Pish!!!
U is the Mac Mami of poetry..
loves you Pish
Jackie xoxoxox
U is the Mac Mami of poetry..
loves you Pish
Jackie xoxoxox
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18th Jun 2015 6:41am
Re: Healing
18th Jun 2015 4:53am
Ahhh, Pishashee, luv ~ :-*
This is so sweetly lovely. That transcendent luminosity. The quality of light filtering through the water: you've captured the essence so well in such sparseness of language, yet richly, evocatively.
Oh, you are such a wondrous and awesome creation, luv! :-*
This is so sweetly lovely. That transcendent luminosity. The quality of light filtering through the water: you've captured the essence so well in such sparseness of language, yet richly, evocatively.
Oh, you are such a wondrous and awesome creation, luv! :-*
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18th Jun 2015 6:47am
Re: Healing
18th Jun 2015 4:13pm
So delicate and ponderous, Pisha. The title adds to the theme and understanding of what you write and where your curiosity leads.
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re: Re: Healing
21st Jun 2015 12:44pm
The starfish is a wonderful roll model for healing. Thank you for that excellent comment on the title.