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To Dominate
(Changed and entered in the Dom or Sub competition)
You display your beautiful colors
To lure me in
You hypnotically dance and twirl
To mesmerize my lonely heart
You sing and
Enslave my aching soul
Nibbling slowly, sweetly
You devour me completely
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
You display your beautiful colors
To lure me in
You hypnotically dance and twirl
To mesmerize my lonely heart
You sing and
Enslave my aching soul
Nibbling slowly, sweetly
You devour me completely
(C) 2015 XMAR82 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
Published 16th Jun 2015
| Edited 3rd Feb 2017
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17th Jun 2015 1:31am
Ahhhhh!! loving this fast pace piece!!
Woot woot!!
Loves you Gabe!!
Write on!!!
Jackie xoxox
Woot woot!!
Loves you Gabe!!
Write on!!!
Jackie xoxox
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18th Jun 2015 1:14pm
"Nibbling slowly, sweetly
You devour me completely"
~ache felt, perfect ending lines
This bitter-sweet song of a siren is
gorgeous misters! Enjoyed much ;)
be wellz!
~d
You devour me completely"
~ache felt, perfect ending lines
This bitter-sweet song of a siren is
gorgeous misters! Enjoyed much ;)
be wellz!
~d
21st Jun 2015 5:52am
Ack! I wish I'd been around DUP when this competition was in full swing cause I would've entered some of my fetish work, having once lived a number of years active in the lifestyle! I'll eventually start posting some of those poems on my account here but putting several of them in a competition would've been fun... and I would've loved to have seen and read the other entries, now that I've had the pleasure to see/read yours!
