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Bloodwork
I'm feeling dangerous
Naughty
Wickedly decadent...
You've been warned
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I want my whips:
The cat
Mayhap,
The bull
I want my knives:
Scalpels
Mayhap,
Flechettes
Can you take what I've got to give?
Tonight
Can You give what i need?
Make mE all right?
Let's begin
I'm hungry
For this
All night
I carve
Intricate patterns
Delicately
Cross
Your back
No breaks in your skin
Barely feel the trace
Of my knives
Gleaming
Steel
Leaving
Whispers in place
You moan as my breasts scrawl across tendered skin
Reddened from the passage of my
Razored edges upon
I lean upward
Rest my lips by your ear as I breathe
Ready, luv? You're so good
Ready now, Luv, bleed for me
Kissing you oh-so-tenderly as I gently glide
back along
sliding down
twixt your legs
Which you've spread
Wielding cat with a flick of my wrist
Over sensitized skin
I begin sensual work
Making blood
To the surface
Glow
Now, the glory
Of my artistry
Is truly evident
Tracery of crimson
Risen
Glistens in candlelight
Oh! You're gorgeous
And, I'm wet
Time to change the flow
Here we go...
You know what you want
What I want too
This night's getting darker now
Here you go
Flechettes pierce my shoulders
By my neck
Leaving tiny scarlet rivulets
I can see your thirst
I've released the beast
Unleashed it all
Feral, you pin me down
Pushing wide my legs
Latching onto the flow
Biting into me
And
Thrusting deep lodging tightly
I'm struggling under you
Not quite ready though I'm soaking
Need time to adjust
You're not giving it to me
(well, you are, oh, you are and you are)
Growling now as you suck and shove deeper in
I am filled with you and you're stretching me
Now, I'm screaming as you shaft me reaming deeply again and again
Sucking
Biting
Convulsing round you
You move your mouth
Look down upon me
Vermilion painting your lips
Say
You ready?
We've just begun
Get ready to beg...
Naughty
Wickedly decadent...
You've been warned
*
*
*
*
*
I want my whips:
The cat
Mayhap,
The bull
I want my knives:
Scalpels
Mayhap,
Flechettes
Can you take what I've got to give?
Tonight
Can You give what i need?
Make mE all right?
Let's begin
I'm hungry
For this
All night
I carve
Intricate patterns
Delicately
Cross
Your back
No breaks in your skin
Barely feel the trace
Of my knives
Gleaming
Steel
Leaving
Whispers in place
You moan as my breasts scrawl across tendered skin
Reddened from the passage of my
Razored edges upon
I lean upward
Rest my lips by your ear as I breathe
Ready, luv? You're so good
Ready now, Luv, bleed for me
Kissing you oh-so-tenderly as I gently glide
back along
sliding down
twixt your legs
Which you've spread
Wielding cat with a flick of my wrist
Over sensitized skin
I begin sensual work
Making blood
To the surface
Glow
Now, the glory
Of my artistry
Is truly evident
Tracery of crimson
Risen
Glistens in candlelight
Oh! You're gorgeous
And, I'm wet
Time to change the flow
Here we go...
You know what you want
What I want too
This night's getting darker now
Here you go
Flechettes pierce my shoulders
By my neck
Leaving tiny scarlet rivulets
I can see your thirst
I've released the beast
Unleashed it all
Feral, you pin me down
Pushing wide my legs
Latching onto the flow
Biting into me
And
Thrusting deep lodging tightly
I'm struggling under you
Not quite ready though I'm soaking
Need time to adjust
You're not giving it to me
(well, you are, oh, you are and you are)
Growling now as you suck and shove deeper in
I am filled with you and you're stretching me
Now, I'm screaming as you shaft me reaming deeply again and again
Sucking
Biting
Convulsing round you
You move your mouth
Look down upon me
Vermilion painting your lips
Say
You ready?
We've just begun
Get ready to beg...
Published 9th Jun 2015
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9th Jun 2015 5:02am
9th Jun 2015 4:42pm
9th Jun 2015 5:11am
9th Jun 2015 4:47pm
9th Jun 2015 5:19am
9th Jun 2015 7:00pm
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much. Glad I am to enchant thee.
"...how so like a Temptress you are, you are..."
Says the great Tempter, says he, he does... ;-*
Thank you very much. Glad I am to enchant thee.
"...how so like a Temptress you are, you are..."
Says the great Tempter, says he, he does... ;-*
9th Jun 2015 5:47am
9th Jun 2015 10:03pm
9th Jun 2015 11:52am
Work yields rewards, when it's wielded right.
Wonderful to hear your reading, adds so many dimensions to this.
Wonderful to hear your reading, adds so many dimensions to this.
9th Jun 2015 10:18pm
Atakti, luv ~ :-*
Indeed, you have the truth of it grasped tightly just there. ;-* Further, there is a joy within the wielding and all the myriad awarenesses, ne c'est pas, luv?
Thank you, thank you, thank you; I AM glad I was able to convey dimensionality. :-*
Indeed, you have the truth of it grasped tightly just there. ;-* Further, there is a joy within the wielding and all the myriad awarenesses, ne c'est pas, luv?
Thank you, thank you, thank you; I AM glad I was able to convey dimensionality. :-*
9th Jun 2015 4:53pm
You are something amazing & a breath of fresh air! Must read this again..when the night has covered the sky.. alone & in quietness with dim light. I am totally taken by you. By the time I am finish will probably commenting again. Heart pounding rush you've given my sweets
10th Jun 2015 1:14am
Noire HowlingWhelms, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much, sweet one. I am undone by you, rendered speechless by such praise... :-*
Thank you very much, sweet one. I am undone by you, rendered speechless by such praise... :-*
9th Jun 2015 9:53pm
Sensually naughty and enticing. It makes the mind race and the heart pound. I enjoyed it very much Savaja.
10th Jun 2015 1:16am
Xmar82, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so much. I am incredibly gratified to have elicited such a response from you, luv... ;-*
Your enjoyment ensures mine own.
Thank you so much. I am incredibly gratified to have elicited such a response from you, luv... ;-*
Your enjoyment ensures mine own.
9th Jun 2015 10:05pm
What impressed me most was the rich exquisite words delivered with such taunting finesse.
10th Jun 2015 1:39am
Candycrier, luv ~ :-*
Taunting finesse, eh? ;-p
Hmmm...
Seeing myself through your eyes is an extraordinary paradigm shift, luv. :-*
Thank you for continuing to give me sustenance for cogitation...
Taunting finesse, eh? ;-p
Hmmm...
Seeing myself through your eyes is an extraordinary paradigm shift, luv. :-*
Thank you for continuing to give me sustenance for cogitation...
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10th Jun 2015 11:23am
Taryn, luv ~ :-*
Thank you very much, indeed. I am gratified you found pleasure within this piece however you chose to experience it. :-*
Hmmm...
Now, I Do hope the spoken word entices as well, luv.
But, then, I can be rather, er, Demanding that way... ;-*
Thank you very much, indeed. I am gratified you found pleasure within this piece however you chose to experience it. :-*
Hmmm...
Now, I Do hope the spoken word entices as well, luv.
But, then, I can be rather, er, Demanding that way... ;-*
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10th Jun 2015 6:58pm
Ahhh, Taryn, luv ~ :-*
This makes eminent sense and tis how I do it as well, I'll confess. ;-p
Truly, you did not have to come back and listen, though I'm glad you did. I was teasing a bit, luv. ;-*
Thank you very, very, very much, dear luv. :-*
This makes eminent sense and tis how I do it as well, I'll confess. ;-p
Truly, you did not have to come back and listen, though I'm glad you did. I was teasing a bit, luv. ;-*
Thank you very, very, very much, dear luv. :-*
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11th Jun 2015 00:21am
Ahhh, luv ~
Gigglegasps?
You are too adorable for words. :-*
You make me want to elicit those in other ways.
Hmmm...
I wonder if I could...
Damn, if I wouldn't like to try. ;-*
Gigglegasps?
You are too adorable for words. :-*
You make me want to elicit those in other ways.
Hmmm...
I wonder if I could...
Damn, if I wouldn't like to try. ;-*
11th Jun 2015 12:54pm
12th Jun 2015 9:18pm
Ahhh, taito-10, luv ~ :-*
You move me with your response that tis my breath next your ear you find most compelling and beauteous. :-*
Thank you so, luv. :-*
You move me with your response that tis my breath next your ear you find most compelling and beauteous. :-*
Thank you so, luv. :-*
15th Jun 2015 1:55pm
11th Jun 2015 11:13pm
Go on n be greedy baby!! take it all,
n get what u want lol... Hottness for sure!!
n get what u want lol... Hottness for sure!!
12th Jun 2015 9:26pm
Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Rest assured, I shall, oh, I Shall... ;-*
Tis quite satisfying when you submit. And, if You say it's hot, well, who am I to contradict the king of stealth eroticism... ;-*
Thank you, luv. :-*
Rest assured, I shall, oh, I Shall... ;-*
Tis quite satisfying when you submit. And, if You say it's hot, well, who am I to contradict the king of stealth eroticism... ;-*
Thank you, luv. :-*
12th Jun 2015 7:48pm
I read this the first time with some alarm. I read it the second time accompanied by your voice and was helplessly seduced. If there's a little blood spilled then so be it.
12th Jun 2015 9:45pm
Crowfly, luv ~ :-*
From alarm to seduction, I am flattered beyond belief. :-*
You leave me rather astounded, luv...
From alarm to seduction, I am flattered beyond belief. :-*
You leave me rather astounded, luv...
14th Jun 2015 6:22pm
Ahhh, Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
Sometimes what heightens pleasure best is the interaction with pain and certainly, what elevates and frees one's consciousness can be found therein as well... :-*
That said, making you lose consciousnesses, eh, luv? ;-*
Thank you for such tribute afore my blade and whip have ever caressed thy flesh...
Sometimes what heightens pleasure best is the interaction with pain and certainly, what elevates and frees one's consciousness can be found therein as well... :-*
That said, making you lose consciousnesses, eh, luv? ;-*
Thank you for such tribute afore my blade and whip have ever caressed thy flesh...
17th Jun 2015 2:01am
17th Jun 2015 2:04am
The plot and the flow. Its like you're giving a presentation on this and I'm seeing the pictures on the projection screen. It was a smooth ride.
Good read
Good read
17th Jun 2015 3:34am
Ahhh, Atript-Abhinav, luv ~ :-*
I have no idea why this comment was cut off, but I am inordinately pleased by it, nonetheless, luv. ;-*
Thank you. :-*
I have no idea why this comment was cut off, but I am inordinately pleased by it, nonetheless, luv. ;-*
Thank you. :-*
17th Jun 2015 3:56am
Atript-Abhinav, luv ~ :-*
Thank you ever so much, though I'd rather hoped to draw you in more than solely viewing a presentation. I can see I'll have to work on that, luv. ;-p
I AM glad you found it a smooth pictorial and that you remained until the conclusion of the feature. ;-*
Thank you ever so much, though I'd rather hoped to draw you in more than solely viewing a presentation. I can see I'll have to work on that, luv. ;-p
I AM glad you found it a smooth pictorial and that you remained until the conclusion of the feature. ;-*
Anonymous
18th Jun 2015 3:00am
this is very well done
18th Jun 2015 3:36am
