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Sonder (Acrostic)
Shakespearean Sonnet, 116, teach
Of the steadfast vow in Love; O, No!
None wavering impediment occur amid
Darkest hour of hope. Sickle cannot deter
Each particle of Star; Time cannot prevent
Rebirth of who we are.
~
Of the steadfast vow in Love; O, No!
None wavering impediment occur amid
Darkest hour of hope. Sickle cannot deter
Each particle of Star; Time cannot prevent
Rebirth of who we are.
~
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Re: Sonder
Anonymous
31st May 2015 11:51pm
bravo! damn! you made a sonnet out of six lines! lol you win!
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Re: Sonder
31st May 2015 11:57pm
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2015 1:36am
the sonder tango...
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Re: Sonder
1st Jun 2015 4:17am
& if his words should be proven false, he avowed: 'I never writ, nor no man ever lov'd.'
that is the substance of our vocation as writers...
that is the substance of our vocation as writers...
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Re: Sonder
1st Jun 2015 6:50am
Re: Sonder
1st Jun 2015 4:36pm
Your brain throws great thought to
pair my coffee every mornin'! Look
forward to your thoughts and *this?
No exception!
Your sonder sparks ponder here m'dear ;)
Time certainly tries to spike aspiration.
blessings,
~d
pair my coffee every mornin'! Look
forward to your thoughts and *this?
No exception!
Your sonder sparks ponder here m'dear ;)
Time certainly tries to spike aspiration.
blessings,
~d
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Re: Sonder
1st Jun 2015 4:50pm
Thank you, darksighing one. You too, Danny. Your comments are always very much appreciated.
Re: Sonder
1st Jun 2015 6:01pm
"Stars, hide thy fires. Let not light see my black and deep desires." You help blow away such thoughts Ahavati. Thanks!
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Re: Sonder
Anonymous
3rd Jun 2015 3:25pm
if your title means what i think it does, the layers to this are even more lovely and textured
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28th May 2016 8:51am
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28th May 2016 11:47am
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27th Nov 2016 4:10am
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