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Drenched
I am drenched.
Thinking of you
The myriad permutations of want
Desire
Eroticism....
I dream
Of
Your hands
Administering the intertwined twins:
Blistering
Pleasure
Exquisite
Pain
I twist and sob in excruciated delight
At
Your
Command
This
Control
You
Have
Over me is divine and devilish
Simultaneously
I'm torn
I want this
Desire
Yet, fear my need
Fear myself
Fear what (and how) you make me feel
Mmm...
Laid bare
In so very many ways
You're delving deeply
Am I what you expect?
All wet and glistening
Radiant within
Calescence surrounding you as you probe
I'm clenching now
Spasming
Intellect
And
Mind
Tousled
In disarray
As well
You've truly
Taken me
Over
With volcanic potency
Thank You, Sir.
And how...
Thinking of you
The myriad permutations of want
Desire
Eroticism....
I dream
Of
Your hands
Administering the intertwined twins:
Blistering
Pleasure
Exquisite
Pain
I twist and sob in excruciated delight
At
Your
Command
This
Control
You
Have
Over me is divine and devilish
Simultaneously
I'm torn
I want this
Desire
Yet, fear my need
Fear myself
Fear what (and how) you make me feel
Mmm...
Laid bare
In so very many ways
You're delving deeply
Am I what you expect?
All wet and glistening
Radiant within
Calescence surrounding you as you probe
I'm clenching now
Spasming
Intellect
And
Mind
Tousled
In disarray
As well
You've truly
Taken me
Over
With volcanic potency
Thank You, Sir.
And how...
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Re: Drenched
31st May 2015 8:41pm
re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 00:41am
Ahhh, HadesRising, luv ~ :-*
You've made my day. ;-D
I once worked with a man who used to say to me, occasionally, when a particular woman caught his eye. Terrible of us, I know, to respond in such a way. Twas rather fun, though. We never spoke of one another in such fashion, though, although privately I thought he was quite attractive - okay, hot! ;-*
At any rate, one day he says to me, after I spent time torturing myself with a flat iron (a thing I Never do for I detest such things on my head and refuse to go through them; further, I rather adore my wild curls - I'd done it That day at a friend's behest for she wanted to see just how long my hair really is).
Anyway... my point.
Tis this: that day, because twas so unusual, he commented upon my hair and said it Was quite long, but that he preferred women with wild, untamed curls; said that was smokin'. I never forgot it because of the way he got all shy and sheepish and blushed a bit; I think he felt twas an admission he shouldn't have let out. He was married, we remained friends, naught occurred, but for a brief moment there was that frisson of somewhat extra there...
Thanks for the reminder of that. ;-*
And, thank you so very, very, very much for your kudos. I consider this high praise indeed from a man I consider a maestro of dark poetry. ;-*
You've made my day. ;-D
I once worked with a man who used to say to me, occasionally, when a particular woman caught his eye. Terrible of us, I know, to respond in such a way. Twas rather fun, though. We never spoke of one another in such fashion, though, although privately I thought he was quite attractive - okay, hot! ;-*
At any rate, one day he says to me, after I spent time torturing myself with a flat iron (a thing I Never do for I detest such things on my head and refuse to go through them; further, I rather adore my wild curls - I'd done it That day at a friend's behest for she wanted to see just how long my hair really is).
Anyway... my point.
Tis this: that day, because twas so unusual, he commented upon my hair and said it Was quite long, but that he preferred women with wild, untamed curls; said that was smokin'. I never forgot it because of the way he got all shy and sheepish and blushed a bit; I think he felt twas an admission he shouldn't have let out. He was married, we remained friends, naught occurred, but for a brief moment there was that frisson of somewhat extra there...
Thanks for the reminder of that. ;-*
And, thank you so very, very, very much for your kudos. I consider this high praise indeed from a man I consider a maestro of dark poetry. ;-*
re: re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 5:41am
You are too kind, my friend. And it's nice to get that little bit of attention here and there, even if nothing ever happens. It happens to me a few times even after I got hitched. It's funny how when we're teenagers we crave that attention and are usually disappointed. I guess patience is a virtue after all.
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Re: Drenched
Anonymous
31st May 2015 8:56pm
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re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 00:56am
Ahhh, Sansaint-Fondant, luv ~ :-*
Thank you ever so much, luv. You make me incredibly grateful I voiced this. ;-*
Thank you ever so much, luv. You make me incredibly grateful I voiced this. ;-*
Re: Drenched
31st May 2015 11:09pm
Superb in its sensuality! Vivid in its imagery! I appreciate the significance of this line
"All wet and glistening
Radiant within"
Evidence that you feel the erotic power deeply both inside and out.
Beautifully written, Savaja!
"All wet and glistening
Radiant within"
Evidence that you feel the erotic power deeply both inside and out.
Beautifully written, Savaja!
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re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 3:07am
Thank you greatly, Gahddess_Worship, luv! :-*
You are most magnanimous in your praise. Eroticism is quite a force felt through and through; do not we all resonate with this force within and without as creatures of nature, luv? :-*
Again, thank you for your generous praise. ;-*
You are most magnanimous in your praise. Eroticism is quite a force felt through and through; do not we all resonate with this force within and without as creatures of nature, luv? :-*
Again, thank you for your generous praise. ;-*
Re: Drenched
1st Jun 2015 5:21am
re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 3:14am
Xmar82, luv ~ :-*
Ahhh, you gift me with your words, luv. I am always joyous when I provide you with alluring pleasure. ;-*
Thank you so very much, luv. :-*
Ahhh, you gift me with your words, luv. I am always joyous when I provide you with alluring pleasure. ;-*
Thank you so very much, luv. :-*
Re: Drenched
1st Jun 2015 6:45am
re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 3:18am
Ahhh, VegasPoet, luv ~ :-*
You weaken my knees with want...Sir ;-*
Taunt me not, Luv. ;-p
Thank You, indeed, oh, indeed.
You weaken my knees with want...Sir ;-*
Taunt me not, Luv. ;-p
Thank You, indeed, oh, indeed.
re: re: Re: Drenched
4th Jun 2015 7:07am
Great strength is often displayed upon bended knee.
But, you already know this. :)
But, you already know this. :)
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Re: Drenched
Anonymous
1st Jun 2015 3:07pm
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re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 3:24am
Re: Drenched
Anonymous
1st Jun 2015 9:57pm
Savaja,
the visuals in your words is a clenching delight! Enjoying the heat!
tornado
the visuals in your words is a clenching delight! Enjoying the heat!
tornado

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re: Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 3:32am
Tornado, luv ~ :-*
I am fortunate you found within my words spasming joy. Molten bliss. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your incendiary words and praise. :-*
I am fortunate you found within my words spasming joy. Molten bliss. :-*
Thank you, luv, for your incendiary words and praise. :-*
Re: Drenched
2nd Jun 2015 5:33am
A voice and delivery few possess in the world. I am always sorry you are not fully, world widely, recognized in a most demanding and difficult art--the spoken word.
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re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 3:37am
Candycrier, luv ~ :-*
I have been struggling long and long with what to say here in reply.
I am o'erwhelmed by your extremely generous magnanimity, luv. :-* I think I do not have that which you indicate, but I bask in the bliss of your high regard, nonetheless.
Thank you, luv, a thousand-fold thank you. :-*
I have been struggling long and long with what to say here in reply.
I am o'erwhelmed by your extremely generous magnanimity, luv. :-* I think I do not have that which you indicate, but I bask in the bliss of your high regard, nonetheless.
Thank you, luv, a thousand-fold thank you. :-*
re: re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 5:34am
One correction: It is not my extremely generous magnanimity, but my response to an objective reality. Once you realize that you will be on your way.
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re: re: re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 9:05pm
Invariably, candycrier, luv, invariably, you make me ponder, ruminate, engage critical thought. Thank you, luv. :-* Thank you for challenging me, my paradigm...
Re: Drenched
3rd Jun 2015 10:48am
The articulation of ANY manifestations of pleasure
you spill, causes mental stimulation to yearn woefully
for true physical penetration!! Lmao. Awesomeness my dear! :)
you spill, causes mental stimulation to yearn woefully
for true physical penetration!! Lmao. Awesomeness my dear! :)
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re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 3:53am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Mmm...
Oh. My.
Any articulations of my pleasure cause such yearnings, ne c'est pas?
Hmmm...
I DO have this cake for you I believe I mentioned before... ;-*
Thank you very, very much, Erotic Ninja, luv. (Shall I be expecting a stealth mission?)
Mmm...
Oh. My.
Any articulations of my pleasure cause such yearnings, ne c'est pas?
Hmmm...
I DO have this cake for you I believe I mentioned before... ;-*
Thank you very, very much, Erotic Ninja, luv. (Shall I be expecting a stealth mission?)
Re: Drenched
3rd Jun 2015 7:17pm
You are... beyond words..
I can't find ones that'll do your work justice..
... Drenched,
Literally
I can't find ones that'll do your work justice..
... Drenched,
Literally
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re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 3:58am
Ahhh, vivid_mocha, luv ~ :-*
You do me tremendous honor. I am humbled, luv. :-*
As for that precious nectar you exude: I am beyond grateful for such delectable, lubricious tribute. ;-*
Oh! But for a taste...
You do me tremendous honor. I am humbled, luv. :-*
As for that precious nectar you exude: I am beyond grateful for such delectable, lubricious tribute. ;-*
Oh! But for a taste...
Re: Drenched
Anonymous
5th Jun 2015 9:16pm
Well I can only echo the previous kudos,naughty and sensoual and 'glistens' with sexual ecstasy.
But your voice is hypnotizing! I like,
But your voice is hypnotizing! I like,

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re: Re: Drenched
6th Jun 2015 4:03am
Slowgasm, luv ~ :-*
Thank you so very much for your echoes, though methinks I'm hearing new original ecstatic strains of yours. :-*
You are most kind and generous to me and I am thrilled you have found somewhat pleasing to you herein. ;-*
Thank you so very much for your echoes, though methinks I'm hearing new original ecstatic strains of yours. :-*
You are most kind and generous to me and I am thrilled you have found somewhat pleasing to you herein. ;-*
Re: Drenched
10th Jun 2015 5:31am
Darling One! Your "twist and sob" is
contagion-incarnate here!
"Am I what you expect?
All wet and glistening
Radiant within
Calescence surrounding you as you probe
I'm clenching now
Spasming"
~Sweet Goddess en-flux!
..m'womb quivers warmly on read, very much enjoyed!
be well ;)
~d
contagion-incarnate here!
"Am I what you expect?
All wet and glistening
Radiant within
Calescence surrounding you as you probe
I'm clenching now
Spasming"
~Sweet Goddess en-flux!
..m'womb quivers warmly on read, very much enjoyed!
be well ;)
~d
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re: Re: Drenched
10th Jun 2015 1:53pm
Darksighs, luv ~ :-*
You have a way with words that makes me smile rather deliciously.
Thank you for that and thank you for your extravagant praise, luv. :-*
Contagion-incarnate, Sweet Goddess en-flux! - je t'adore, ma petite!
As for your warmly quivering womb...how very tempting you are, luv... ;-*
You have a way with words that makes me smile rather deliciously.
Thank you for that and thank you for your extravagant praise, luv. :-*
Contagion-incarnate, Sweet Goddess en-flux! - je t'adore, ma petite!
As for your warmly quivering womb...how very tempting you are, luv... ;-*