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Night Stranger
Fill my night with warmth
I'm waiting
Take my ache away
Make me forget myself
so I can feel you
Speak loosely of love
and tell me lies
Wear me
Nothing on you but me
Give it all to me
I'll give it all to you
Your secret is my secret
Fill my night with warmth
I'm waiting
Take my ache away
Make me forget myself
so I can feel you
Speak loosely of love
and tell me lies
Wear me
Nothing on you but me
Give it all to me
I'll give it all to you
Your secret is my secret
Fill my night with warmth
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Re: Night Stranger
28th May 2015 10:46pm
Comes across as a warm cosy line. A warm-blooded man would surely warm (so to speak) to the prospect of wearing nothing but his woman wearing nothing on her!
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re: Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 1:17am
Exactly SS, on those chilly night's
two bodies close together. Thank you :)
two bodies close together. Thank you :)
Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 00:09am
"Nothing on you but me." I'd try to wear you well. I like the way you contain this, "Fill my night with warmth" first and last. Fine work Tommie.
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re: Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 1:19am
What's better then body heat?
Sounds nice right? Glad you liked it crowfly,
thank you :)
Sounds nice right? Glad you liked it crowfly,
thank you :)
Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 1:36am
draped in each other - always the way to spend the night. sexy, Tommie...
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re: Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 1:59am
I agree John, very sexy. Thanks for your wonderful comment and reading me. :)
Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 6:17pm
Tommie, you say such amazingly sensual things! "Wear me
Nothing on you but me"
!
Oh my that's HOT!
The best outfit ever :)
Nothing on you but me"
!
Oh my that's HOT!
The best outfit ever :)
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re: Re: Night Stranger
29th May 2015 6:59pm
Re: Night Stranger
30th May 2015 00:47am
Love as an illusion of the heart... Simple gestures and words to ease the ache of loneliness.. I can relate to this well. At least in the way I interpreted it... Others have different perspectives, I see:)
A sweet and sensual read...
A sweet and sensual read...
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re: Re: Night Stranger
31st May 2015 1:24pm
You're spot on kittyfromhell
Loneliness is painful, the need for words,any kind
is most welcoming. Thank you for your wonderful comment
and thanks for reading me. :)
Loneliness is painful, the need for words,any kind
is most welcoming. Thank you for your wonderful comment
and thanks for reading me. :)