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Out of the blue: BDSM ruminations
I like
Men Women
equally
Always
Been that way, you see
I like sex
And spice
Living life zestfully, free
I find it difficult to choose:
Domme or sub
Most oft, I cheat (Oh!)
My subs pick Me (I cater to their need)
BDSM fascinates for though as Domme I'm in control:
I'm no good if I don't see and mete what My sub really needs as he/she pleads upon tender knees or spreadeagled for My greedy deeds...
Cherished treasure indeed.
Ironic, isn't it that as a sub i can submit the whole me knowing (even though i don't control the moment or what will happen next - - that that will take me by surprise and i will be pushed beyond where i imagined i had boundaries) still can i know i will be cared for with utmost tenderness
F
o
r
the Domme or Dom who fails in aftercare is an unmitigated Idiot (and I'm not speaking here of the isolated instance where One might forget for a slight while due to...ahem...somewhat other exigencies)
It is here, in this, i know, i finally know, i'm precious and oh-so-priceless...
This leads me to an ongoing internal debate I've been having for quite some time about the nature of power and control and its many permutations. Mayhap, though, that's for another time...
Men Women
equally
Always
Been that way, you see
I like sex
And spice
Living life zestfully, free
I find it difficult to choose:
Domme or sub
Most oft, I cheat (Oh!)
My subs pick Me (I cater to their need)
BDSM fascinates for though as Domme I'm in control:
I'm no good if I don't see and mete what My sub really needs as he/she pleads upon tender knees or spreadeagled for My greedy deeds...
Cherished treasure indeed.
Ironic, isn't it that as a sub i can submit the whole me knowing (even though i don't control the moment or what will happen next - - that that will take me by surprise and i will be pushed beyond where i imagined i had boundaries) still can i know i will be cared for with utmost tenderness
F
o
r
the Domme or Dom who fails in aftercare is an unmitigated Idiot (and I'm not speaking here of the isolated instance where One might forget for a slight while due to...ahem...somewhat other exigencies)
It is here, in this, i know, i finally know, i'm precious and oh-so-priceless...
This leads me to an ongoing internal debate I've been having for quite some time about the nature of power and control and its many permutations. Mayhap, though, that's for another time...
Published 27th May 2015
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27th May 2015 4:57am
The BDSM lifestyle intrigues me. There's something freeing about, as an adult, just doing what your told. Thought provoking words my kindred spirit.
31st May 2015 3:00am
Gahddess_Worship, luv ~ :-*
There is something, indeed, intriguing and immensely freeing within BDSM whether one embraces lifestyle BDSM, is more malleable in one's approach, or dabbles with it.
Being able to, especially and especially as an adult step outside of responsibility for everything can be sheer relief, gift of gods, opiate... ;-*
I am glad I could spark concerted ponderance, luv.
There is something, indeed, intriguing and immensely freeing within BDSM whether one embraces lifestyle BDSM, is more malleable in one's approach, or dabbles with it.
Being able to, especially and especially as an adult step outside of responsibility for everything can be sheer relief, gift of gods, opiate... ;-*
I am glad I could spark concerted ponderance, luv.
27th May 2015 5:42am
31st May 2015 8:03am
Ahhh, blackhyde, luv ~ :-*
I am humbled by you, luv. I have not words enough to convey my feelings here left stranded by three blazing jewels strung together...
Thank you so very, very much, luv. :-*
I am humbled by you, luv. I have not words enough to convey my feelings here left stranded by three blazing jewels strung together...
Thank you so very, very much, luv. :-*
27th May 2015 6:31am
discipline seen from both sides of the firm hand. illustrious in the aftercare...
31st May 2015 8:32am
JohnFeddeler, luv ~ :-*
Indeed, both sides, though I seem to recall for which side you have a predilection. ;-*
I believe you mentioned once upon a time something about how gratifying torment for the impatient submissive was to the one wielding the whip... ;-*
You see how your comments remain with one, luv. That was back in Portrait of a minx.
My point is that I am highly gratified you, Sir, have come to favorably comment lending your thoughts on discipline and the importance of aftercare. Thank you, luv. :-*
Indeed, both sides, though I seem to recall for which side you have a predilection. ;-*
I believe you mentioned once upon a time something about how gratifying torment for the impatient submissive was to the one wielding the whip... ;-*
You see how your comments remain with one, luv. That was back in Portrait of a minx.
My point is that I am highly gratified you, Sir, have come to favorably comment lending your thoughts on discipline and the importance of aftercare. Thank you, luv. :-*
Anonymous
28th May 2015 3:32am
All that's missing now in this poem. . .is me;). . .Excellent piece, Miss Savaja. . .I can really feel your inner BDSM shining from in between the lines. . .Enjoyed. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
31st May 2015 8:38am
DevlinDLC, luv ~ :-*
You're missing?! Oh no no no. You're not. You're in there. I swear.
Wherever you want to be, luv. :-*
Thank you, thank you, thank you so very much for your praise.
I am exceedingly grateful you enjoyed this piece, luv. ;-*
You're missing?! Oh no no no. You're not. You're in there. I swear.
Wherever you want to be, luv. :-*
Thank you, thank you, thank you so very much for your praise.
I am exceedingly grateful you enjoyed this piece, luv. ;-*
Anonymous
28th May 2015 2:23pm
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31st May 2015 8:43am
Ahhh, REKS24, luv ~ :-*
I am glad, indeed, I could provide you with such a pleasant surprise.
You are most welcome, luv.
Thank YOU for such an exuberant welcome! ;-*
I am glad, indeed, I could provide you with such a pleasant surprise.
You are most welcome, luv.
Thank YOU for such an exuberant welcome! ;-*
Musings and Interval
I absolutely love your use of the "ruminations" in the title. It's mindful!
This switch[y] ditty here is a fun explosion of your mind on paper, I found it delightfully intricate in it's musings.
Often [we] forget the need to explain ourselves, it's often a kindness to our readers. They begin to feel they know us better and read our words more meaningful.
You have dynamic pen, that slips through information and situations like lightning in the night. Leaves a gymnasium for the playful mind.
A mind that is rambling is the healthiest type!
The liberation in the awakening in the end is priceless and special. Yes my dear you are precious!
Love @ You
Al -x-
I absolutely love your use of the "ruminations" in the title. It's mindful!
This switch[y] ditty here is a fun explosion of your mind on paper, I found it delightfully intricate in it's musings.
Often [we] forget the need to explain ourselves, it's often a kindness to our readers. They begin to feel they know us better and read our words more meaningful.
You have dynamic pen, that slips through information and situations like lightning in the night. Leaves a gymnasium for the playful mind.
A mind that is rambling is the healthiest type!
The liberation in the awakening in the end is priceless and special. Yes my dear you are precious!
Love @ You
Al -x-
13th Jun 2015 9:02am
Ahhh, Al, luv ~ :-*
You darling dear heart. Thank you so very much. My mind must be extraordinarily healthy by your measure, luv. ;-D I ramble a great deal! You are wonderfully kind to me; you know that liberation in the end was geared to demonstrate a sub's awakening, not mine own. :-* You give me such a gift, luv!!!
You are a treasure, Al, luv. :-* Thank you so very much.
You darling dear heart. Thank you so very much. My mind must be extraordinarily healthy by your measure, luv. ;-D I ramble a great deal! You are wonderfully kind to me; you know that liberation in the end was geared to demonstrate a sub's awakening, not mine own. :-* You give me such a gift, luv!!!
You are a treasure, Al, luv. :-* Thank you so very much.
Anonymous
27th Dec 2016 4:10am
My Sultry Savaja, she grins huge evil wide ones...pleasure is pleasure regardless which gender is gifting it, we know I feel this way and we also fall on the same side (to a degree) with regards to the picking of one...admittedly the side I am not known to right from intrigues me, as to whether or not I would bode well in execution is another story, however, the aftercare I am most confident I would deliver quite well....
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
With love - Schiitaryn xoxo
