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Cherry Blossoms
The ephemeral nature of love
Blooms in radiant splendor
Exploding in passionate red lace
Caressed in lines of pink satin
In ecstasy so brief it seems unfair
For so intense a pleasure to die so quietly
After the roar of apogee bursting from your flower
Colored my world in strokes of pure artistry
That paints and brushes have failed to portray
And the ink of verse has earnestly strived to describe
Somehow nothing in nature can compare to the natural flow
Erupting from the depths of your swirling Volcanic storm
Striking my fancy with surging currents of electricity
As thunder booms above clouds of soft silk petals on your tree
Branching out to surround me in your song of springs desire
With the sweetest scent my senses have ever come to taste
Cherry passions bleed, clouding my vision in thick auburn mist
Your fragrance and beauty showers my heart in raging pain
For knowing these fleeting pleasures cannot be sustained
Immortalized in poems spoken in whispers in the dark
I would sacrifice this temporary bliss for one eternal kiss
Blooms in radiant splendor
Exploding in passionate red lace
Caressed in lines of pink satin
In ecstasy so brief it seems unfair
For so intense a pleasure to die so quietly
After the roar of apogee bursting from your flower
Colored my world in strokes of pure artistry
That paints and brushes have failed to portray
And the ink of verse has earnestly strived to describe
Somehow nothing in nature can compare to the natural flow
Erupting from the depths of your swirling Volcanic storm
Striking my fancy with surging currents of electricity
As thunder booms above clouds of soft silk petals on your tree
Branching out to surround me in your song of springs desire
With the sweetest scent my senses have ever come to taste
Cherry passions bleed, clouding my vision in thick auburn mist
Your fragrance and beauty showers my heart in raging pain
For knowing these fleeting pleasures cannot be sustained
Immortalized in poems spoken in whispers in the dark
I would sacrifice this temporary bliss for one eternal kiss
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
Anonymous
24th May 2015 7:48pm
"Immortalized in poems spoken in whispers in the dark
I would sacrifice this temporary bliss for one eternal kiss"
Now that is just beautiful. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
I would sacrifice this temporary bliss for one eternal kiss"
Now that is just beautiful. . .xoxo, Devlin;)
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24th May 2015 7:54pm
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24th May 2015 8:46pm
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25th May 2015 00:20am
Ahhh, Poetryman, luv ~ :-*
This poem is so very poignant, I am moved to tears.
I am haunted by this line:
Your fragrance and beauty showers my heart in raging pain
She has left an indelible mark; the ineffable beauty you create as a result is delicate as cherry blossoms and as enduring as the memories of cherries passed throughout generation upon generation... :-*
Still, sweet, tender, poignant, bittersweet as this is, elementals of fire and lightning underlie it, sweep through it, set it quietly ablaze.
You have a masterful pen, maestro. :-*
This poem is so very poignant, I am moved to tears.
I am haunted by this line:
Your fragrance and beauty showers my heart in raging pain
She has left an indelible mark; the ineffable beauty you create as a result is delicate as cherry blossoms and as enduring as the memories of cherries passed throughout generation upon generation... :-*
Still, sweet, tender, poignant, bittersweet as this is, elementals of fire and lightning underlie it, sweep through it, set it quietly ablaze.
You have a masterful pen, maestro. :-*
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re: Re: Cherry Blossoms
25th May 2015 1:34am
Thank you for such high praise Savaja, I appreciate your very kind words! JJ
Re: Cherry Blossoms
25th May 2015 00:41am
Eternal kisses are sooo final, Poetryman.:) Good read as always. I wonder sometimes.. you should have kept on teaching, more would benefit from your knowledge.
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25th May 2015 1:31am
Thank you for commenting Grace! While I tend to agree about teaching, a complex path was set ahead of me that I had to follow. But then I had a stroke and has made everything more complicated and difficult, so it seems it would not have mattered either way. Thank you for the vote of confidence! JJ
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25th May 2015 7:57pm
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25th May 2015 8:07pm
Thank you, Cherry! One must make trade-offs in life to get what one wants in return. I'm so glad you love it, your inspiration was deeply re(a)d... jj
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25th May 2015 8:09pm
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26th May 2015 1:07am
FYI, I added a line based on the comment I left on one of your poems earlier today... jj
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Anonymous
26th May 2015 2:17am
Hi JJ....I read this off line and had to come and tell you what a beautiful stunning write this is......super enjoyed this very sensual and passionate visual piece.....tipping my pen to you with respect.....xo :)
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26th May 2015 2:43am
Thank you for such a nice comment Gail, and for returning from cyber space to make it... Much appreciated! jj
Re: Cherry Blossoms
26th May 2015 4:29am
"..Exploding in passionate red lace
Caressed in lines of pink satin.."
~ love the way you slap bold reds and pink on bare canvas, straight off..
"..As thunder booms above clouds of soft silk petals on your tree
Branching out to surround me in your song of springs desire"
~power of a small, sweet death painted here!
I'd say- homage paid, man, adore this ;)
be good!
~d
Caressed in lines of pink satin.."
~ love the way you slap bold reds and pink on bare canvas, straight off..
"..As thunder booms above clouds of soft silk petals on your tree
Branching out to surround me in your song of springs desire"
~power of a small, sweet death painted here!
I'd say- homage paid, man, adore this ;)
be good!
~d
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26th May 2015 5:07am
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27th May 2015 4:17pm
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27th May 2015 4:55pm
Are you dipping into yupu pain meds already David? Lololol, kidding of course... thanks for commenting! JJ
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Re: Cherry Blossoms
22nd Jun 2015 9:12pm
"In ecstasy so brief it seems unfair
For so intense a pleasure to die so quietly"
Tou·ché! Brilliantly said. You have a distinct, wonderful voice, PM.
For so intense a pleasure to die so quietly"
Tou·ché! Brilliantly said. You have a distinct, wonderful voice, PM.
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22nd Jun 2015 9:43pm
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22nd Dec 2015 6:21pm
Lol you got a lot of likes for this one and I can see why! I have always been obsessed with the cherry blossom tree and what it stood for. Beautiful tree and you definitely hit on the mark with this poem. You ended it so perfect as well.
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22nd Dec 2015 7:44pm
Thank you again for reading and commenting so wonderfully! Glad you like it too!!!
JJ
JJ
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20th Oct 2017 00:55am
thank you for gifting me such a sublime poem today
so beautiful & passionate is your poetry..
~Raven
so beautiful & passionate is your poetry..
~Raven
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20th Oct 2017 1:49am
I'm so glad you like it Raven. I thought you might after reading your Cherry Blossom poem... and thank you for sharing yours as well! JJ
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Anonymous
20th Oct 2017 9:16am
Just beautiful, love this one
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20th Oct 2017 10:27am
Thank you Sophie! Nice to get love on a poem after a year and a half... :) JJ
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23rd Oct 2023 11:45am
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23rd Oct 2023 8:11pm
Thank you again Lil, it warms my heart to see you reading and adding my poems to your RL!
JJ
JJ