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Linen And Lace
“.....give me your linen, take from me my lace”
It's taste
is like sweet, white icing
spread atop the layers
of her golden-brown cake
as delicate as fine lace,
an intricate, lattice-work art
causing my heart to pound
against the walls of my chest
bought to form with great finesse
accentuating every single
glistening curve,
mountainous peak
deeply cavernous valleys,
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene......
…....”something in the way she moves”
wrapped up inside
a gentile beauty
that I may
taste,
caress,
flesh against my flesh,
I adore....
(…..why don't people make love like this anymore)
my eyes watch
until this brilliant,
hand-made fabrique
slowly,
gently,
falls
to
the floor
my hardness melts
and drips like a candle
knowing what's in store,
my erotic heart
slowly rises
once more
caught within the
enraptured visions
of your......
…...linen and lace
It's taste
is like sweet, white icing
spread atop the layers
of her golden-brown cake
as delicate as fine lace,
an intricate, lattice-work art
causing my heart to pound
against the walls of my chest
bought to form with great finesse
accentuating every single
glistening curve,
mountainous peak
deeply cavernous valleys,
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene......
…....”something in the way she moves”
wrapped up inside
a gentile beauty
that I may
taste,
caress,
flesh against my flesh,
I adore....
(…..why don't people make love like this anymore)
my eyes watch
until this brilliant,
hand-made fabrique
slowly,
gently,
falls
to
the floor
my hardness melts
and drips like a candle
knowing what's in store,
my erotic heart
slowly rises
once more
caught within the
enraptured visions
of your......
…...linen and lace
Published 21st May 2015
| Edited 22nd May 2015
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22nd May 2015 00:28am
22nd May 2015 4:02am
Thank you sassy.......I'm in the mood for a pretty melody. A beautiful, flowing fantasy. I hope that desire was adequately conveyed in this ink.......: )
Anonymous
22nd May 2015 2:51am
MrM,
My brother, in you capable hands this striking vision jumps to life! Yes!!!
tornado
My brother, in you capable hands this striking vision jumps to life! Yes!!!
tornado
22nd May 2015 4:05am
Thank you bro......had a moment during this "rainy day" that caused me to reminesce about a certain storm from my past.....very now and then, I miss her and her wonderful ink around here.......sigh
22nd May 2015 8:08am
Thank you Grace...I think that I'd like to shift your atmosphere in a moment like this 'pon linen sheets :)
22nd May 2015 3:46pm
dang bro..."accentuating every SINGLE
glistening curve,
mountainous peak
deeply cavernous valleys,
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene...... "
doesn't get any better then that!
glistening curve,
mountainous peak
deeply cavernous valleys,
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene...... "
doesn't get any better then that!
22nd May 2015 3:51pm
Thank you my brother....It's amazing the inspiration you can find in the music of Stevie Nicks and Don Henley : )
22nd May 2015 4:07pm
yes although it is more understandable now that I know Stevie was pregnant with Don's child.
22nd May 2015 4:10pm
23rd May 2015 5:25pm
"(…..why don't people make love like this anymore)"
I really love this piece! So deeply felt....amazing as always!
I really love this piece! So deeply felt....amazing as always!
12th Jun 2015 12:15pm
Thank you for the affirmation. To those who *still* love and love deeply.
4th Jun 2015 4:50am
When it's soft and slow, even when it's steamy and hungry. When it's give and take, linen and lace. When it lingers over those moments...
That's when you can feel it. That's when the audience knows they're hearing a memory.
That's a very private bit of bliss. It can't ever be captured, so damn... you bring the postcard back so elegantly for the moments. Thanks for the look inside, MrM!
That's when you can feel it. That's when the audience knows they're hearing a memory.
That's a very private bit of bliss. It can't ever be captured, so damn... you bring the postcard back so elegantly for the moments. Thanks for the look inside, MrM!
12th Jun 2015 12:14pm
"....that's a very private bit of bliss. It can't ever be captured, so damn... you bring the postcard back so elegantly for the moments. "
Thank you 4 this Loki : )
Thank you 4 this Loki : )
6th Jun 2015 10:48pm
12th Jun 2015 12:16pm
12th Jun 2015 7:13am
Ahhh, Mr_Mahogany_Wood, luv ~ :-*
I came and read this some time ago and simply had no words for its ineffable, ephemeral beauty.
You write this with such a delicate eroticism, luv, it's as though the divine resides within. :-*
I came and read this some time ago and simply had no words for its ineffable, ephemeral beauty.
You write this with such a delicate eroticism, luv, it's as though the divine resides within. :-*
12th Jun 2015 12:19pm
".....you write this with such a delicate eroticism, luv, it's as though the divine resides within."
Thank you. It does, she is and.......I want. #sweetesttaboo
Thank you. It does, she is and.......I want. #sweetesttaboo
2nd Oct 2016 6:17pm
Such a delicate and elegant write!
You master the skill of phrasing, sound and subtle rhyme...
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene...... > love these lines!
You master the skill of phrasing, sound and subtle rhyme...
casting shadows upon every dream
innocent or obscene...... > love these lines!
