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my fallen angel
Your wings! They are torned!
But yet you show no pain.
Let me be the one to mend them,
So you can fly again.
But yet you show no pain.
Let me be the one to mend them,
So you can fly again.
Published 23rd May 2011
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23rd May 2011 10:08am
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Your wings! They are torn!
The short form is rather difficult, but you seem to have a knack for it... experiment, but know that this is a form you are already comfortable with.
