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Absolution
Absolution at the end of the day
Water adjusted with the usual precision
The flow descending with force
And set to 104 degrees Fahrenheit
Standing, steaming, dreaming
All is sacred
Sins washing away, forgotten
This sanctuary inviolate until...
My Goddess steps in
Her smile scattering meditation
Skin inviting, not to be denied
I wash her in worship
Hands sliding over those holy breasts
Then she's not too deified to kneel
And take me with the blessing of her lips
Leading me to a paradise found
Right here at home.
Water adjusted with the usual precision
The flow descending with force
And set to 104 degrees Fahrenheit
Standing, steaming, dreaming
All is sacred
Sins washing away, forgotten
This sanctuary inviolate until...
My Goddess steps in
Her smile scattering meditation
Skin inviting, not to be denied
I wash her in worship
Hands sliding over those holy breasts
Then she's not too deified to kneel
And take me with the blessing of her lips
Leading me to a paradise found
Right here at home.
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Re: Absolution
Anonymous
8th May 2015 4:49pm
that....
well, that was a lovely picture you just painted.
well done.
well, that was a lovely picture you just painted.
well done.
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Anonymous
8th May 2015 5:00pm
a sensual feast for the senses, crowfly. simply lovely
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8th May 2015 5:44pm
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8th May 2015 5:46pm
I could spend all day in the shower given the right companionship. Thanks Taryn! Love you too!
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10th May 2015 3:14am
Thomas I hope ur feeling better..
U always write with great passion
always good to see u acttive..
loves you always and forever Crow
Zazzles xoxoxox
U always write with great passion
always good to see u acttive..
loves you always and forever Crow
Zazzles xoxoxox
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16th Jun 2015 8:34pm
This is absolutely admirable & beautiful. .& it is does lend contentment when reading thus respectful adoration in en'laced . A want & need to do just because ..that's how much. A lovely feeling perhaps.
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re: Re: Absolution
17th Jun 2015 3:11am
Respect and adoration do not preclude lust. A balance must be kept! Thanks Noire.