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452
a morning of mourning
begging ache for egg bacon
moving slow I hold fast
for what - I don't know
about white bait and nations
or calico warp spirals
a fabric of fever of favour
of the tragic and of magic
of a universe - I know
I will live beyond dawn
because you said - so
begging ache for egg bacon
moving slow I hold fast
for what - I don't know
about white bait and nations
or calico warp spirals
a fabric of fever of favour
of the tragic and of magic
of a universe - I know
I will live beyond dawn
because you said - so
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26th Apr 2015 11:37pm
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27th Apr 2015 8:21am
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26th Apr 2015 11:48pm
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27th Apr 2015 8:28am
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27th Apr 2015 2:16am
philosophy & a substantial meal, all served up by a forthright woman...
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27th Apr 2015 11:49am
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27th Apr 2015 3:02pm
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Anonymous
27th Apr 2015 4:10pm
Who knows what a new day holds?
But we certainly want to start with and old friend,'breakfast'. the familiar smells and taste have a rich history in our lives we can now start and face what is about to hit us.
Just one line that really hits today.
"a morning of mourning "
But we certainly want to start with and old friend,'breakfast'. the familiar smells and taste have a rich history in our lives we can now start and face what is about to hit us.
Just one line that really hits today.
"a morning of mourning "
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28th Apr 2015 00:54am
like the weather everything can change in a single day - thanks for joining me today!
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28th Apr 2015 10:57pm
Moving slow I hold fast
For what I don't know
Had too many mornings like that, I always thought I was just stubborn, refusing just because food was offered.
For what I don't know
Had too many mornings like that, I always thought I was just stubborn, refusing just because food was offered.
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29th Apr 2015 1:03am
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29th Apr 2015 00:09am
Mourning, magic and so much in between. It's a tough call where the day takes you. I really like your word play here. It's not a distraction. It reinforces the mystery. Really fine job Whale.
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29th Apr 2015 1:04am