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Adjacent Psychos
Terence from the front unit
A gangster from days of yore
Now this furious presence just dropping by
Blurting accusations, threats and bile
His entertainment has been tearing thin of late
Nine Inch Nails driven right through the south wall
Those decibels humping in these ears
Choose to fuck me with rodent love
Terence, grinning savagely, shifts gears
Offers a fevered admonition
"You do realize that she's a slut"
Referring, of course, to the succubus next door
Not comprehending how long I've been waiting
So "keep the hell away from us" seems apt
Won't ruin an only prospect
Thus his delivery not condoned or accepted
And this door slams with little ceremony
Right in his face.
A gangster from days of yore
Now this furious presence just dropping by
Blurting accusations, threats and bile
His entertainment has been tearing thin of late
Nine Inch Nails driven right through the south wall
Those decibels humping in these ears
Choose to fuck me with rodent love
Terence, grinning savagely, shifts gears
Offers a fevered admonition
"You do realize that she's a slut"
Referring, of course, to the succubus next door
Not comprehending how long I've been waiting
So "keep the hell away from us" seems apt
Won't ruin an only prospect
Thus his delivery not condoned or accepted
And this door slams with little ceremony
Right in his face.
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Re: Adjacent Psychos
22nd Apr 2015 5:04pm
wow so raw, crowfly, I wonder do you think "they" think the same things you think too?
U are a gifted writer my friend and i always enjoy your scribes...
Always with love
Jackie xoxoxox
U are a gifted writer my friend and i always enjoy your scribes...
Always with love
Jackie xoxoxox
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re: Re: Adjacent Psychos
22nd Apr 2015 5:13pm
Good point, Jackie. I'm sure they have similar thoughts. I'm at least as psycho as they are, after all. Still not sure about the succubus, though. We shall see....
Re: Adjacent Psychos
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2015 5:25pm
He sounds like a total wanker who has resorted to name calling. I'm not sure if I have got the right end of the stick but I hate these judgemental types. I bet the woman is just lost and miss understood.
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re: Re: Adjacent Psychos
22nd Apr 2015 5:37pm
She is lost, hyper but at times very sweet. Definitely misunderstood. "Terence" varies wildly in his approach. One day he praises her, calling her sister, then the next threatening to take her out with his gang affiliations. Never a dull moment!
Re: Adjacent Psychos
Anonymous
22nd Apr 2015 5:38pm
fuck him. nice little write, crow. as always.
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22nd Apr 2015 5:53pm
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22nd Apr 2015 9:32pm
Re: Adjacent Psychos
23rd Apr 2015 5:24pm
it's so easy to be caught up in & transported by your wondrous imagery, crowfly...
... in interesting train of thought here. enjoyed
... in interesting train of thought here. enjoyed
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re: Re: Adjacent Psychos
30th Apr 2015 2:30am
Re: Adjacent Psychos
23rd Apr 2015 9:55pm
Not the level of confrontation one desires with adjacent parties. Sorry to hear things have slid to this.
Your words certainly paint him as a self-centered nut-case jerk.
Ugh - flak jacket and protective headgear Crowfly, hit the trenches man!
Your words certainly paint him as a self-centered nut-case jerk.
Ugh - flak jacket and protective headgear Crowfly, hit the trenches man!
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re: Re: Adjacent Psychos
30th Apr 2015 2:31am
Re: Adjacent Psychos
29th Apr 2015 4:54am
Punk-ass kids man. You just stay your path man. It's your journey, not that asshole's.
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re: Re: Adjacent Psychos
30th Apr 2015 2:34am
He begs to differ, very loudly and persistently, but everyone in this terrority doesn't pay him much mind anymore, thank God.