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Less Is More...
Less is more...
More or less
see how the blood
of ink spills from the chest
Less is more
more or less
unreeled,
feel emotions undress'
More is less,
a need to express
with time's invest
thru unopened doors
as less belies more
Less is more
more or less...
When one explores
the sense of the heart's
depth...
More or less
see how the blood
of ink spills from the chest
Less is more
more or less
unreeled,
feel emotions undress'
More is less,
a need to express
with time's invest
thru unopened doors
as less belies more
Less is more
more or less...
When one explores
the sense of the heart's
depth...
Published 21st Apr 2015
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Anonymous
21st Apr 2015 6:32pm
Such beauty as always in your words, this one leaving a more to ponder over. Less is more when you have the talent (like yourself) to be able to express so much so simply.
21st Apr 2015 6:33pm
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21st Apr 2015 6:48pm
Aaaawww n U have the gift of a golden
heart my sweet lady! Thank u so very much
for your continued support of my ink :)
heart my sweet lady! Thank u so very much
for your continued support of my ink :)
Anonymous
21st Apr 2015 9:46pm
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22nd Apr 2015 6:48pm
Well as long as ur swimming may as well 'skinny dip'
n make it more enjoyable! lol... Thank u sweetie :)
n make it more enjoyable! lol... Thank u sweetie :)
22nd Apr 2015 2:46am
What u tryin to say? What u tryin to say? What u tryin to say? lol thank u my sweetness, grateful as always for ur support of my work :)
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24th Apr 2015 2:27am
This was great, I especially loved the way you tied it all together in the end! :)
24th Apr 2015 8:01am
Thank you my friend, pleased to know you liked
n truly appreciate your support always :)
n truly appreciate your support always :)
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23rd May 2015 1:55am
A Poetik mind indeed...and you exhibit that here ever so effortlessly my dude...such a clever play on words deep with meaning..you already know how much I'm diggin this piece!!!
23rd May 2015 10:06pm
Aaaawww my dear bro. God bless u kid, I'm flattered n humbled by your thoughts n support always! :)
24th May 2015 3:48am
Ahh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
Here you are arrowing deep into the heart and mind, pulling out profundity from mundane words as Rumpelstilskin wove gold from straw...
Come, tarry with me, luv. I desire some time in your company; let us speak together... :-*
Here you are arrowing deep into the heart and mind, pulling out profundity from mundane words as Rumpelstilskin wove gold from straw...
Come, tarry with me, luv. I desire some time in your company; let us speak together... :-*
24th May 2015 12:33pm
Gosh I have missed ur highly intellectual
n stimulating responses to my ink, yes come as shall
hope u have some dinner waiting! lol ;) I thank u a ton sweetie :)
n stimulating responses to my ink, yes come as shall
hope u have some dinner waiting! lol ;) I thank u a ton sweetie :)
