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Loving the Bones off You
My journey of flight
above you
glorious you are
taking you
Joyously in my sight
Watching you writhe
twist and spasm
Squeezing you tight
my love chasm begs
for warm sensations
deep into me
riding away night
Your warning shout
Inviting the moans
feeling our love
glow
flow
around our skin
into our bones.
above you
glorious you are
taking you
Joyously in my sight
Watching you writhe
twist and spasm
Squeezing you tight
my love chasm begs
for warm sensations
deep into me
riding away night
Your warning shout
Inviting the moans
feeling our love
glow
flow
around our skin
into our bones.
Published 12th Apr 2015
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12th Apr 2015 9:18am
Erotic twist (in more than one sense) apparent in middle verse. Hot read.
12th Apr 2015 10:16am
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12th Apr 2015 10:09am
You always have so many great poems 😁
I was seeing today that I almost have a 100 poems then I look at yours and you almost have a 1000, lol.
That's wild 😁
I was seeing today that I almost have a 100 poems then I look at yours and you almost have a 1000, lol.
That's wild 😁
12th Apr 2015 10:18am
It's not so much about numbers more about content
id be happy with 100 if as good as yours xD
but thankyou anyways DC
much appreciated indeed
id be happy with 100 if as good as yours xD
but thankyou anyways DC
much appreciated indeed
12th Apr 2015 3:11pm
Your poems are all great ^^
And i have hit and misses, lol.
I love all my poems but sometimes they are more stuff i just want to enjoy and read. And that means i only get them sometimes :-/
Ether way i enjoy all your poems ^^
And i have hit and misses, lol.
I love all my poems but sometimes they are more stuff i just want to enjoy and read. And that means i only get them sometimes :-/
Ether way i enjoy all your poems ^^
12th Apr 2015 3:28pm
Yeah i think we all have hit and miss poetry we write
i love all of mine though some have more substance than others
with me it's think it write it and not necessarily spend days working on one
i find that it takes away something from the poem if i keep changing
xD
most i guess write this way 😊
i love all of mine though some have more substance than others
with me it's think it write it and not necessarily spend days working on one
i find that it takes away something from the poem if i keep changing
xD
most i guess write this way 😊
12th Apr 2015 4:16pm
anymore that's what i do. Get off work, write a poem then sleep ^^
I made some pretty good poems too when i think them over. Some of my greatest and worst poems i have spent time on, lol!
I made some pretty good poems too when i think them over. Some of my greatest and worst poems i have spent time on, lol!
12th Apr 2015 4:17pm
