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I am Woman
Born of Libra
Justice rules
Under Venus
the flirtatious
I do not break
or seek to please
please me do
not me to you
I love
and love to love
seek and I pleasure
but I'm not a whore
I am tough
I am soft
I am an enigma
I am a lot of I.
*this poem was entered in a competition. Thank you for reading*
Published 2nd Apr 2015
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2nd Apr 2015 11:04am
I love the last line. It sets the poem off brilliantly. Good luck with your competition!
2nd Apr 2015 1:40pm
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2nd Apr 2015 2:43pm
this is spectacular! very well done. the word choice packs a great punch.
3rd Apr 2015 00:48am
2nd Apr 2015 6:04pm
You are woman. Hear you roar! You're standing strong and proud. I like the way this shows your multifaceted nature in a few concise lines. Very well done.
3rd Apr 2015 7:28am
Thank you Crowfly...I think most people have personalities contained within one.:)
