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'Imagine Love-Perfect'
"Mi amor, mi vida, me confieso ti"
that's how I feel eternally...
In a world in which everything
was perfect...there lovers we'd be
joined in unison, the two of us
happy...
And though it may not be a reality,
I do firmly believe that to be conceived
as a 'perfect we' it's simply how I'd
complete you n' you'd complete me
That's just how perfect we'd be
an absence of fault begat our
sole perfection, makes me smile
at this 'other-worldly connection...'
You see, I view a better me
nested within your reflection
a perfect love, such sweet confection
this infection, detectin' feathered
touches gifted by lovin' hands
butterfly sweet kisses expand
just to reassure me I'm your man
with long walks, the midnight talks,
'soul connected' that's where I stand
"Mi amor, mi vida, me confieso ti"
that's how I feel eternally...
If only this were a world,
where every love went perfectly
there'd be no darkness or sorrow
no need to go inside, self to burrow
n' then those words would ring truly
"Mi amor, mi vida, me confieso ti"
that's how I feel eternally...
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Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
Anonymous
14th Mar 2015 12:53pm
ah, but love isn't sticky sweet all the time. and if it was....well, we'd be full of cavities and rot!
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14th Mar 2015 8:36pm
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14th Mar 2015 11:35pm
Oh it's sticky all the time, but just not sweet lol
Thank you my friend, I'm honored u have returned
to check out another offering :) appreciate that n you very much :)
Thank you my friend, I'm honored u have returned
to check out another offering :) appreciate that n you very much :)
Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
14th Mar 2015 8:39pm
re: Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
14th Mar 2015 11:36pm
That indeed it does! n hey I'm flattered you're here too! Thank you sweetness, deeply grateful for your support :)
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15th Mar 2015 1:28am
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15th Mar 2015 1:55am
Thank you my friend, I appreciate your constant support
of my ink, you are the bestest! :)
of my ink, you are the bestest! :)
Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
15th Mar 2015 4:00am
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16th Mar 2015 8:11pm
Aaaaawwww!! Sending u mega big hugs n soft
hot kisses! lol thank u my dearest :)
hot kisses! lol thank u my dearest :)
Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
16th Mar 2015 10:09pm
You write your love poetry as though you're speaking directly to whoever reads it...so beautiful PM.... xo
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re: Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
17th Mar 2015 00:12am
Thank you, too bad for me it makes not the least bit of difference in getting ANY one to accept it lol...
appreciate ur kindness n support :)
appreciate ur kindness n support :)
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17th Mar 2015 1:57am
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Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
18th Mar 2015 1:24am
Que poema maravilloso Poe!
You know it's beautiful to see you write in spanish.
Me encanta tus palabras ;)
You know it's beautiful to see you write in spanish.
Me encanta tus palabras ;)
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re: Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
18th Mar 2015 4:18am
Gracias mi Amiga, I happen to love the language
it's one of the most beautiful in my opinion
N I also love Latinas! lol appreciate greatly :)
it's one of the most beautiful in my opinion
N I also love Latinas! lol appreciate greatly :)
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23rd Mar 2015 8:58am
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23rd Mar 2015 4:46pm
Aaaaawwwww.... Truly n deeply flattered you thought so!!
Thank u so much my sweetheart... Appreciate u much :)
Thank u so much my sweetheart... Appreciate u much :)
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4th Apr 2015 12:10pm
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Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
Anonymous
17th Apr 2015 2:54pm
Words can't begin to express how much I love this! You had me in the first line. It's a keeper! :)
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Re: 'Imagine Love-Perfect'
17th Apr 2015 4:07pm
Wow...n you have me, forever humbled!
Love how u spoil me my dear n truly thank you! :)
Love how u spoil me my dear n truly thank you! :)