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Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
You get your little blue pills
Worth thousands of dollars, you say,
And count them
Over and over again
In a dark room
In a dark car
On your mother’s couch
On your unmade bed
And then….
You spill them all over the floor
And must count them again.
More missing each time
Less to count, but each becoming
An even more precious commodity
Your lips mottled and dry
With that sticky blue spittle
And your pupils shrink
Tiny, black points
I imagine your soul
Is fleeing
Diminishing through those
Little black points.
I’m leaving, I say,
You don’t hear me.
I walk out the door feeling
A demon smile smugly
Burning the skin
Of my receding back
Through those little black pupils
While carefully eyeing
That diminishing pile
Of little blue pills.
Worth thousands of dollars, you say,
And count them
Over and over again
In a dark room
In a dark car
On your mother’s couch
On your unmade bed
And then….
You spill them all over the floor
And must count them again.
More missing each time
Less to count, but each becoming
An even more precious commodity
Your lips mottled and dry
With that sticky blue spittle
And your pupils shrink
Tiny, black points
I imagine your soul
Is fleeing
Diminishing through those
Little black points.
I’m leaving, I say,
You don’t hear me.
I walk out the door feeling
A demon smile smugly
Burning the skin
Of my receding back
Through those little black pupils
While carefully eyeing
That diminishing pile
Of little blue pills.
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 8:31pm
re: Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 8:36pm
hahahha...not the ones I'm talking about. But, seriously, it's not my line of business ;-).
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11th Mar 2015 8:38pm
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11th Mar 2015 8:40pm
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11th Mar 2015 8:42pm
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 8:56pm
i been looking for two of those fuckers
all day they wrre in a cig pack
no coubt i threw away
all day they wrre in a cig pack
no coubt i threw away
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re: Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 8:58pm
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 11:04pm
worth more than the money it takes to purchase them, to that particular soul. great piece...
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
11th Mar 2015 11:21pm
Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
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12th Mar 2015 00:51am
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
12th Mar 2015 4:02am
Although he's counting close there might still be an overdose. Maybe, maybe not, but when keeping track of Daddy's little helpers becomes a full time job it's time to say adios. Sounds like he's already made his choice. I'd rather get a buzz from work like yours. sweet Virginia.
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
Such dark truth. I hate drugs. I will only drink very little. Lost many good friends and family to drugs. Just ridiculous.
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Re: Your Oxy's are worth Thousands
12th Mar 2015 9:38pm
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14th Mar 2015 2:46am