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Coy Concubine
Waiting for Coy Concubine
In the floating bed
This warrior has poured the wine
Before appetites are fed
Spirits watching from above
All knowing fully well
She's practiced in the ways of love
So no need to cast a spell
Listen to the strumming lyre
As the hour grows late
Will add more fuel to the fire
Burning lower with the wait
But patience may finally pay
So just wait and see
It could be she'll finally stay
And become my bride to be.
In the floating bed
This warrior has poured the wine
Before appetites are fed
Spirits watching from above
All knowing fully well
She's practiced in the ways of love
So no need to cast a spell
Listen to the strumming lyre
As the hour grows late
Will add more fuel to the fire
Burning lower with the wait
But patience may finally pay
So just wait and see
It could be she'll finally stay
And become my bride to be.
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- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
9th Mar 2015 4:33am
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9th Mar 2015 7:47am
do i detect an edit? missing [wry] lines? me thinks i do...
... either way, i enjoy the curves of your ode to the odalisque.
... either way, i enjoy the curves of your ode to the odalisque.
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10th Mar 2015 8:17pm
I hope she stays! please stay whoever you are!!!
love this Crow...
Love you !
Zazzles xoxoxox
love this Crow...
Love you !
Zazzles xoxoxox
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10th Mar 2015 8:37pm
She's just another of many fantasies. I'm glad you enjoyed Jackie. Love you too!
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12th Mar 2015 8:24pm
This is great Crowfly! I can hear the soft strumming of a lute, smell the crackling fire and mulled wine and hear the silken whisper of clothes falling to the floor.
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12th Mar 2015 9:21pm
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22nd Mar 2015 10:23am
Visitors in the night stir and change us. Damn! The silken wings and the lingering smells... some things are too real crowfly!
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