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A 'Diamond in the Rough'
Apart, she's fallen
piece after wretchedly
sorrowful piece
pain, her callin...'
Fallen, into the depths of her
ill-regarded bein' THEY
tried to blind her from seein...'
Yet, thru this arduous process
hurtful tears, n' soul searin'
sadness that wrangled her
for years...fallin' apart
was simply the start...
As she shed the shell
of her former self
to expose a wondrous luster
shinin' brightly...a GEM
of unforetold wealth!
*For all women who have overcome
tragedy n adversities no one believed they could*
piece after wretchedly
sorrowful piece
pain, her callin...'
Fallen, into the depths of her
ill-regarded bein' THEY
tried to blind her from seein...'
Yet, thru this arduous process
hurtful tears, n' soul searin'
sadness that wrangled her
for years...fallin' apart
was simply the start...
As she shed the shell
of her former self
to expose a wondrous luster
shinin' brightly...a GEM
of unforetold wealth!
*For all women who have overcome
tragedy n adversities no one believed they could*
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Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
4th Mar 2015 4:32pm
re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
4th Mar 2015 4:45pm
Aaaawwww....sending big hugs n kisses... Thank you sweetest
one... Grateful beyond words :)
one... Grateful beyond words :)
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
4th Mar 2015 6:31pm
re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
4th Mar 2015 8:00pm
Shine u? Mmmmm okie, let me oil my hands up first! lol
Thank u my dear, appreciate u much :)
Thank u my dear, appreciate u much :)
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 11:23am
This is so beautiful PM...I can so relate to the feelings...thank you for the dedication to all women...
You are a beautiful man... :)
You are a beautiful man... :)
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re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 11:32am
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 4:15pm
re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 9:22pm
Lol aaawww bro. Tell u what I'll give u a big bro. Love hug
n hi five in lieu of a kiss deal? lol... Thanks a ton
u rock dude! :)
n hi five in lieu of a kiss deal? lol... Thanks a ton
u rock dude! :)
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 5:37pm
re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
6th Mar 2015 00:49am
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
5th Mar 2015 8:32pm
Sometimes i feel like you writing about me!Do you by chance have the code to my diary?
Thank you for this heartfelt dedication!As a woman,i feel honoured and appreciated reading it!We toil so much with pain and betrayal but still somehow we shade off all that and shine again!Enormous strength indeed as highlighted by your ink!
I salute you tonight Poetik!Bless your heart!
Kisses!
Thank you for this heartfelt dedication!As a woman,i feel honoured and appreciated reading it!We toil so much with pain and betrayal but still somehow we shade off all that and shine again!Enormous strength indeed as highlighted by your ink!
I salute you tonight Poetik!Bless your heart!
Kisses!
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re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
6th Mar 2015 00:55am
Hey if u weren't so far from my reach I would be writing about u lol... Truly, you humble me my dear n I'm forever grateful always for ur sweet support of my work :)
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
7th Mar 2015 5:49am
What a great poem honoring women and all the hardships that we have to face. You have such a loving heart Poe, Salute'
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re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
7th Mar 2015 2:19pm
Thank u my dear, too bad for me it doesn't give me
much in return lol... Appreciate ur support always :)
much in return lol... Appreciate ur support always :)
Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Apr 2015 2:56pm
18th Apr 2015 2:54pm
:') Deeply felt, beautifuly penned. You are so very rare, I'm so glad our paths have crossed 'pulchram animae' x

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re: Re: A 'Diamond in the Rough'
18th Apr 2015 9:11pm
You gonna keep this up n I'm gonna
be obligated to add you to my payroll lol
Truly, honored n humbled beyond words for all
your sweet praises n support my dear lady :)
be obligated to add you to my payroll lol
Truly, honored n humbled beyond words for all
your sweet praises n support my dear lady :)
Re. A 'Diamond in the Rough'
18th Jun 2016 2:45am
Beautifully written. Nice reminder to the diamonds that the lustre is just below the surface waiting to be polished. Lovely, simply lovely
Willow
Willow
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19th Jun 2016 1:16pm