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this city once held so many possibilities...
we used to think that all of the every day things
of life were just sand and that if we brushed
them aside there'd be magical worlds underneath
but now all I find is a desert...
of life were just sand and that if we brushed
them aside there'd be magical worlds underneath
but now all I find is a desert...
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Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
Anonymous
4th Mar 2015 2:35am
Too much hope only leads to disappointments, sadly, that's how it is Dartford.
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re: Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 4:45pm
guess you're right, although
too much hope is a bit like
too much love - of course
you'll end up disappointed,
but you'll still be the better
for having been capable of it..:)
too much hope is a bit like
too much love - of course
you'll end up disappointed,
but you'll still be the better
for having been capable of it..:)
Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 4:41am
I had the re-check who wrote this after reading. Nice, simple truth by someone who generally takes a less serious tone. Intriguing....
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re: Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 4:47pm
Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 2:27pm
You know there's oil under there somewhere. Either that or a temple pyramid. Either way its very nice poetry.
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re: Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 4:50pm
I suppose I didn't dig deep enough -
but then I suppose I never do...
thanks, Pish
but then I suppose I never do...
thanks, Pish
Re: this city once held so many possibilities...
4th Mar 2015 7:33pm
This is my favourite of yours Paul. I love the idea of magical worlds. I'm sure they are in a much deeper place. :)
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4th Mar 2015 10:29pm
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