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Your Lover in my Wasteland
Today the wind is
Blowing bits of ice
In a vortex, from the vortex.
My hands are frozen bricks,
Brilliant, blue skies
Empty and cruel.
Your overseer came for you:
Black tar
Blow
Blues, pink ladies
And you’re gone again.
But what are we,
Any of us,
Under this kind of sky?
Nothing more than one
Of these slivers of ice
Swirling in an empty eddy.
Only you
Can get away with your
Loving addiction
And I stay chilled
In the barren grey.
Blowing bits of ice
In a vortex, from the vortex.
My hands are frozen bricks,
Brilliant, blue skies
Empty and cruel.
Your overseer came for you:
Black tar
Blow
Blues, pink ladies
And you’re gone again.
But what are we,
Any of us,
Under this kind of sky?
Nothing more than one
Of these slivers of ice
Swirling in an empty eddy.
Only you
Can get away with your
Loving addiction
And I stay chilled
In the barren grey.
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Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 5:45pm
re: Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 6:43pm
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2015 5:54pm
This is a heavy write. I feel the weight in your words. I hope things become a little lighter for you...soon.

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re: Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 6:44pm
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 5:54pm
It sounds like love has been disrupted and frozen by drugs, the blow, black tar and pink ladies. One is left "chilled in the barren grey" while the other finds chemical fulfillment. This is a tragic choice, and blood runs cold in the one left alone. Very well done, Virginia.
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re: Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 6:44pm
Great, insightful comment once again, Crow. I always look forward to what you have to say.
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
Anonymous
23rd Feb 2015 5:57pm
Virginia, this a deep, and beautifully written piece.. really like this.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave

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re: Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 6:45pm
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 7:08pm
Very deep and thought provoking
I feel like i need an explanation though? Sorry if that's stupid to ask ^^
I feel like i need an explanation though? Sorry if that's stupid to ask ^^
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re: Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 7:18pm
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 9:40pm
Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
23rd Feb 2015 9:47pm
Damn, this was epic.. I usually resort to rhyming a lot in my poems, but i really like how your poem flows without rhymes. Awesome read, keep on writing :)
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Re: Your Lover in my Wasteland
25th Feb 2015 10:45pm