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Magic Women
Magic women on the line
I read their words and watch them shine
Ecstasy in their design
A thrill traveling right up the spine
I can visualize their grace
Watch them putting on their midnight face
Hear them speaking of both blood and lace
Dealing me the fatal ace
These are witches one and all
Chanting me right up the wall
But they're there to catch me if I fall
Then stimulate me if I stall
Their clear intent is not to stun
Their motto is "Let's have some fun"
My sacrifice is now begun
And at the stroke of twelve my heart is won.
I read their words and watch them shine
Ecstasy in their design
A thrill traveling right up the spine
I can visualize their grace
Watch them putting on their midnight face
Hear them speaking of both blood and lace
Dealing me the fatal ace
These are witches one and all
Chanting me right up the wall
But they're there to catch me if I fall
Then stimulate me if I stall
Their clear intent is not to stun
Their motto is "Let's have some fun"
My sacrifice is now begun
And at the stroke of twelve my heart is won.
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Re: Magic Women
22nd Feb 2015 4:35pm
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22nd Feb 2015 4:45pm
Thank you Lady Crim. It's really good to see you back. You're part of the magic!
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22nd Feb 2015 4:54pm
maybe if I just hang out with you guys more my magic will come back.. i'll sit here and soak you all in.. great write and thank you with love Crim :)
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2015 4:39pm
been wondering where you've been, crow! you've been a constant commenter, but it's been a few days since i laid eyes on your own creations!
i guess you've been to busy with your witches. ;)
i guess you've been to busy with your witches. ;)
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22nd Feb 2015 4:52pm
Yes, I've been lurking around. My own creations? Just call me Dr. Crowenstein. It's alive! Alive! My witches just have to wait sometimes.
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Re: Magic Women
22nd Feb 2015 5:22pm
Yes Crow u have the magic..
I Enjoyed this and you, as always
with love
Zazzles xoxox
I Enjoyed this and you, as always
with love
Zazzles xoxox
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22nd Feb 2015 5:25pm
Whatever magic I have is inspired at least partially by witchcraft in its more benign form. Thanks, Zazzles!
Re: Magic Women
22nd Feb 2015 6:17pm
the flow is really good crow, the matching rhymes
worked well, which is sometimes challenging to accoplish, All in all a god write my friend!
Cheers! Scot.
worked well, which is sometimes challenging to accoplish, All in all a god write my friend!
Cheers! Scot.
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re: Re: Magic Women
22nd Feb 2015 9:34pm
I'm glad the rhymes worked well, Scot. I'm going to have to start taking it easier on them lest I develop obsessive compulsive rhyming disorder. Thanks for the comment!
Re: Magic Women
23rd Feb 2015 2:58am
magic is the word for it. the ladies of the underground, fascinating & fulfilling...
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23rd Feb 2015 5:03pm
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omg I wish I knew how to attach a picture here. I just saw a photo that you could have been writing about when your did this piece..
wow... love it
gonna try to message it to you so you can see what I mean....
I tried... gonna make the photo my profile pic until you get to see it lol
wow... love it
gonna try to message it to you so you can see what I mean....
I tried... gonna make the photo my profile pic until you get to see it lol
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re: Re: Magic Women
23rd Feb 2015 5:05pm
Thank you, Deborah. I've tried a couple of times to supply art by way of illustration but couldn't get it to work. I'll figure it out...
Re: Magic Women
23rd Feb 2015 9:40am
Amen Crowfly. So much stimulation, so many clever female minds, so many sexy words painting sexy pictures...
Argh! Shields down!
Argh! Shields down!
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23rd Feb 2015 5:07pm
Thanks Frank. Any sense of self defense just doesn't apply here. The stimulation's irresistible.
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