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And though they All went away...
To the one yet to be...
Never will I too
lest thine soul's due
your vision within
thy eyes, lies...
Stilled, a perfect view
like a picture to a frame
Still I'd never
ever forget your name
precious forever heart
never to be claimed...
by any other in love's game
forget thee not...
that face, that name...
Never will I too
lest thine soul's due
your vision within
thy eyes, lies...
Stilled, a perfect view
like a picture to a frame
Still I'd never
ever forget your name
precious forever heart
never to be claimed...
by any other in love's game
forget thee not...
that face, that name...
Published 20th Feb 2015
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20th Feb 2015 2:04am
Excellent piece Bro.!!!
Great read and write!!
Awesome is that pen!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great read and write!!
Awesome is that pen!!!
Sir Lancelott
20th Feb 2015 2:19am
Yea, I'd like to think it's at least worthy
of a thought but hey who knows? Happy
you enjoyed though n as always I thank u my bro.
of a thought but hey who knows? Happy
you enjoyed though n as always I thank u my bro.
Quite brilliant i thought I was reading from someone else, no offence but this is not in your genre and it didn't sound like you...
Loved this Po!!!!
Zazzles xoxox
Loved this Po!!!!
Zazzles xoxox
20th Feb 2015 3:42am
NOT sound line me? lol baby if there's one thing you should know by now, I'm ALWAYS experimenting with my style, cadence, format etc... So yea it's exactly like me
n I might add...who do u know that
rhymes exactly like the poetikmind? Lol
Thank u my beauty, appreciate u greatly n always :)
n I might add...who do u know that
rhymes exactly like the poetikmind? Lol
Thank u my beauty, appreciate u greatly n always :)
20th Feb 2015 8:45am
6th Mar 2015 11:27am
Aaaawwww I'm so sorry somehow I missed replying to this! :( Thank u so much my sweetheart as always I'm grateful :)
20th Feb 2015 11:16pm
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21st Feb 2015 2:00am
Sometimes, a face and name becomes etched upon the memory centre.
You capture that, so poetically !
Brilliance...
You capture that, so poetically !
Brilliance...
21st Feb 2015 12:56pm
Your comment touched my heart...thank you
my sweet one, appreciate that n you...
my sweet one, appreciate that n you...
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26th Feb 2015 10:01am
Poe i always admire how you're never stuck in a rut & always experiment with style & diction....
... thanks for a great read
... thanks for a great read
26th Feb 2015 10:27am
My precious lady, I thank you n remain always n forever
grateful for your support... I adore you mami! :)
grateful for your support... I adore you mami! :)
26th Feb 2015 6:58pm
thy remembrance
roses and thorns
the enchantment
of silver tongue
forever behold
the sterling kiss
bestowed upon
loving hearts.
Mr. poetikmind, thou poem inspired thine response, it was beautiful and i truly enjoyed the pure and loving conveyance of your words.
roses and thorns
the enchantment
of silver tongue
forever behold
the sterling kiss
bestowed upon
loving hearts.
Mr. poetikmind, thou poem inspired thine response, it was beautiful and i truly enjoyed the pure and loving conveyance of your words.
26th Feb 2015 8:11pm
Awesome! I loved this n I'm flattered beyond words
U thought enough of mine to be moved, that's a great compliment, you dear precious soul :)
U thought enough of mine to be moved, that's a great compliment, you dear precious soul :)
27th Feb 2015 1:31am
this sentiment is smooth as hell bro..very endearing..
glad to see you still pushin that pen!!!
glad to see you still pushin that pen!!!
27th Feb 2015 2:56am
Yea yea my brotha from the Otha notha motha! lol
Thanks kid n yea u know how WE do! lol
Appreciate always :)
Thanks kid n yea u know how WE do! lol
Appreciate always :)
4th Mar 2015 5:06am
This is beautiful PIKM, your skill in writing different styles never ends. Loving and sincere!
4th Mar 2015 3:27pm
My beauty... :) u have been missed!
N I thank u for ur stopping by once more
to show support, it's deeply appreciated :)
N I thank u for ur stopping by once more
to show support, it's deeply appreciated :)
5th Mar 2015 7:48am
4th Apr 2015 12:22pm
Your words are beautiful. handsome of a poet... I and loving reading Your work...
4th Apr 2015 8:49pm
Anonymous
19th Apr 2015 2:52pm
Such beautiful words! You really are a jack of all trades arnt you, never cease to amaze me!
19th Apr 2015 3:42pm
Aaaawwww well to amaze you I pray I can continue to do
becuz I can't get enough of pleasing you lol thankies my dear
lady :)
becuz I can't get enough of pleasing you lol thankies my dear
lady :)
7th Jan 2017 6:31pm
This poem is astonishingly beautiful conveying unseen worlds and with utmost delicacy.
7th Jan 2017 11:24pm
Wow u just made my entire day! Thank you dear sweet one... Truly appreciate your words :)
