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Crazy Psycho Girl
She dwells in the inverse
Her world glowing whilst others remain dark
Until the Earth shifts
And tables are turned
In her negative
She sheds electrons
To bring vulnerable colour
To a sometimes dour world
Her profane profound prolificness
Supplies her insatiable reality
Fortunate for her fans'
Waxing hunger for heartfelt whispers
For those she favours
A shower of molten exuberance
Sticky sweet heat
Nectar to nurse ego's
Her gifts pinwheel in seductive sparks
Feather light shards of glancing delight
To burn holes through monotone scars
Alighting life in pain's passing
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Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 4:24am
WHOA Her profane profound prolificness
Supplies her insatiable reality
Fortunate for her fans'
Waxing hunger for heartfelt whispers
I am not sure i get this but i think u are hot on the trail of a most talented writer...
either way my impression was awesome !!!
Thanks for the share Franko
Always
Zazzles xoxox
Supplies her insatiable reality
Fortunate for her fans'
Waxing hunger for heartfelt whispers
I am not sure i get this but i think u are hot on the trail of a most talented writer...
either way my impression was awesome !!!
Thanks for the share Franko
Always
Zazzles xoxox
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re: Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 8:19am
Definitely chasing someone, that's for sure!
Thank's for your lovely words Zazzles - they are very much appreciated!
Thank's for your lovely words Zazzles - they are very much appreciated!
Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
Anonymous
15th Feb 2015 4:58am
she sounds like a trip
but a hell of a good time
off center, maybe
but a hell of a good time
off center, maybe
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15th Feb 2015 8:21am
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15th Feb 2015 12:04pm
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15th Feb 2015 12:56pm
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15th Feb 2015 8:28pm
I imagine her chemical structure would be close to a combination of those two elements PS.
Thanks for the like :)
Thanks for the like :)
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re: Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 8:30pm
Oh Crazy Psycho Girl (CPG) is all about stimulating thoughts (amongst other things).
She is too abstract to provide any further definition at this stage.
I have heard that Report Data Man likes her a lot!
She is too abstract to provide any further definition at this stage.
I have heard that Report Data Man likes her a lot!
Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 5:22pm
Being psychotic has its virtues. Her providing a "shower of molten exuberance" is something I would thrill to. I hope no one tries to medicate away her powers.
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re: Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 8:33pm
I agree Crowfly - you can achieve a lot if that psychotic energy is sent in the right directions and harnessed for the right goals.
Glad you liked those lines - sometimes you can almost feel another's thoughts like sparks from molten metal - burning through to light up new ideas!
In regards to medication - I imagine they try but she seems to have an incredible degree of willpower.
Glad you liked those lines - sometimes you can almost feel another's thoughts like sparks from molten metal - burning through to light up new ideas!
In regards to medication - I imagine they try but she seems to have an incredible degree of willpower.
Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
15th Feb 2015 10:17pm
Love this Franko...as Nietzsche said...one must have chaos within one in order to give birth to a star.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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re: Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
16th Feb 2015 7:10am
Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
16th Feb 2015 5:18am
It's called bipolar and/or personality disorder. I've known a woman who fits this bill. Perfectly.
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re: Re: Crazy Psycho Girl
16th Feb 2015 7:13am
Thanks looloolookie, I'm not sure if she has a formal diagnosis at this stage.
I'll make sure she is thoroughly examined by a trained professional.
I'll make sure she is thoroughly examined by a trained professional.
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16th Feb 2015 5:04pm
Haha, I don't think it will help her at this stage.
Other than that clinical opinion...It is an incredible piece. The cadence and imagery is a joy to read and SEE.
Other than that clinical opinion...It is an incredible piece. The cadence and imagery is a joy to read and SEE.
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