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Re: Your beauty
12th Feb 2015 6:57pm
I think it's an individual choice to set that soul free, although some encouragement always helps. It can be frustrating to anyone who sees beauty in a friend or lover who can't see it in themselves. Liberating it can be a challenge and in really tough cases an impossibility. It still doesn't hurt to try. A really fine haiku, Lana, short but sweet.
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Re: Your beauty
12th Feb 2015 9:03pm
Its when you can see beauty in a persons soul and it seems like they still need to discover it. You get that glimse into them and you want to set that part free. Yes it is a persons own choice, but its also sometimes your responsibility to make them see a part of themsekves. A part of of their soul. Thanks for the comment
Re: Your beauty
12th Feb 2015 9:17pm
Although it's not a haiku, it's marvellous. When you look into that soul - what do you see?
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Re: Your beauty
13th Feb 2015 10:55pm
Sounds like a two-handed job this soul grabbing lana, you don't want anything to slip through your fingers!
Nice poem.
Nice poem.
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Re: Your beauty
18th Feb 2015 11:30am
re: Re: Your beauty
19th Feb 2015 8:32am