Draw...

Deborah, you make seduction seem like more than an erotic game.  There's tenderness and emotion involved in "Draw...".  You say "make me beautiful" long before you get to the stimulation then, later, the penetration.  Just as it should be, as much caring as carnal.  Your poem drew me in.

isn't it an erotic game?? lol

pleased to have drawn you in!!

wild indeed...
thanks for reading

Draw my attention    
captivate me, share a smile    
   
What I saw I couldn't mention  
Out the gate, catch your gaze; I like how you wear your style  
   
        Intrigue me    
        draw my curiosity, talk a while;  
   
Knees bounce free,  
Shuffle and hop with me, bop on the tiles.  
   
Draw me in    
seduce me slowly, settle my nerves    
   
I saw within  
Move through flow, not a petal disturbed  
   
        Pose me sensually    
        make my body into art, draw my curves;    
   
What arose? Eventually...  
Takes a glimpse at all parts, raw allure...  
   
Make me feel beautiful    
overcome inhibitions, draw out confidence    
   
Reveal what unpeels, from eyes to lips to cuticles,  
Lips run over every inch of you, nothing missing, I want to explore every nerve's on switch and skin scent.  
   
        Tantalize me    
        use our attraction, your draw is immense;    
   
Tantra magnifies the we  
Groove to passion, slow and tense, rogue from a gent!  
   
Draw my affection    
kiss me hungrily, discover my flavor    
   
Every fantasy in your collection  
Mixes urgently, omniselective behavior!  
   
        Touch me wickedly
        draw my desire, intimacy we'll savor;    
   
Such is the twist from every lick and tease  
Fire rising higher, matching every layer  
   
You draw me in    
stimulate me, the anticipation grows    
   
Never call it a sin  
Spin and escape, hips under my fingertips won't stay in one place so    
   
        Taste me    
        the essence you draw, my arousal flows;    
   
I want a faceful of your sigh of relief  
Your presence gnaws til I growl and show...  
   
Enlighten me, penetrate, titillate    
draw out, thrust, gratify    
   
The right kind of needs, tight sprees, pierce so fierce, elevate, pound loud, gush and ease you back down with trust, mattress baptized...  
   
        Repeat for me, withdraw, plunge, impale    
        climax... multiply, satisfy...  
   
Every beat moves me to lunge, until rhythm makes us one, sipping your dripping trail down your thigh...  
   
Please grant me a pardon if I get instantly re-hardened from your eyes and sigh!

omg I am speechless!!!

amazing...

I think this is my favorite...

*"I want a faceful of your sigh of relief  
Your presence gnaws til I growl and show..."*  
    

You've written sexuality and sex,  and art worthy of any world class museum in this

wow... what a comment
you blow me away sometimes
thank you

After I draw you out will you draw me in?

Love your poem

thank you very much

So to speak, this poem (six years old) still has power to draw the reader attention and it drew me in.