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Anguished Love...
don't hold so tight...
love suffocates
breeds agony
crushes lust
when you do it right...
love enlightens
brings elation
promotes trust
don't make it a fight...
love isolates
stifles spirits
elevates disgust
embrace feelings of delight...
love heals
disengages sorrows
conquers distrust
an anguished love is never alright...
love suffocates
breeds agony
crushes lust
when you do it right...
love enlightens
brings elation
promotes trust
don't make it a fight...
love isolates
stifles spirits
elevates disgust
embrace feelings of delight...
love heals
disengages sorrows
conquers distrust
an anguished love is never alright...
Published 8th Feb 2015
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8th Feb 2015 3:34pm
Deborah, you define the limits of love very well, pointing out how it can be suffocating when it starts to cling. Then, when it becomes a struggle, love stifles and isolates. Then, when done correctly, it heals. You conclude by observing that desperate love doesn't work. You're a wise woman, and I hope you find peace in your romances. This poem's a good start.
8th Feb 2015 5:36pm
was feeling a little smothered
this was my release
thanks!
I appreciate your comments
this was my release
thanks!
I appreciate your comments
9th Feb 2015 3:29am
It's natural or nothing at all.
The right love intertwines with lust, twin pendulums, bringing an amazing ring when they collide.
"It don't mean a thing...
If it ain't got that swing..."
Peggy Lee sings about leather harnesses.
The right love intertwines with lust, twin pendulums, bringing an amazing ring when they collide.
"It don't mean a thing...
If it ain't got that swing..."
Peggy Lee sings about leather harnesses.
9th Feb 2015 3:49am
17th Feb 2015 6:21am
This is glorious in it's expression of both the joys and sorrows of true love
17th Feb 2015 8:17am
