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Sylvia
Wandering as a ghost of resignation
Her memory fading in the morning sun
But still has that hopeful smile
One that no longer quite touches her eyes
Which remain haunted, even in this light
Her neighbors loom, speculating and bemused
Or disturbed, perceiving their own weakness
But she opens her folding chair
Right there in the driveway
And waits
Hoping for some flicker of recognition
An eye turned in kindness, not despair.
Her memory fading in the morning sun
But still has that hopeful smile
One that no longer quite touches her eyes
Which remain haunted, even in this light
Her neighbors loom, speculating and bemused
Or disturbed, perceiving their own weakness
But she opens her folding chair
Right there in the driveway
And waits
Hoping for some flicker of recognition
An eye turned in kindness, not despair.
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Re: Sylvia
5th Feb 2015 6:34pm
Thanks, Schiitaryn. I'm glad you got it. This is about a friend of mine who has Alzheimer's. She keeps saying she's "disappearing" when her sweetness is still there.
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Re: Sylvia
5th Feb 2015 7:53pm
Wow Crow
But she opens her folding chair
Right there in the driveway
And waits << CHILLS wow u really pack a vivid punch!!!
Zazzles
But she opens her folding chair
Right there in the driveway
And waits << CHILLS wow u really pack a vivid punch!!!
Zazzles
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re: Re: Sylvia
5th Feb 2015 8:15pm
It's sad, because it's a way of getting attention. She's lonely and frightened. She's getting help and we, her neighbors, are trying to find some way for her to keep her apartment and not have to go to a board and care. She'll have to eventually, since she's estranged from her family. But Sylvia (not her real name) is getting help, and we're hoping to prolong her residence. If she wants to pop open her folding chair in the driveway that's just fine. The cars can make other arrangements.
Re: Sylvia
5th Feb 2015 8:02pm
Wow Crow, strong write, I am sorry to hear of your friend, I too have people in my life that are slowly fading away , a truly sad way to go, especially as the sufferers are aware of what is happening but unable to do anything about it. Comfort her, and reassure her, it is your duty as a friend.
Cheers! Scot.
Cheers! Scot.
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re: Re: Sylvia
5th Feb 2015 8:18pm
Thanks, Scot. I am trying. We're friends and neighbors, so I see her a few times a day. It would be much harder if she were truly alone. We're a pretty tight little community on this property.
Re: Sylvia
Anonymous
5th Feb 2015 9:18pm
oh my. there is much emotion in this one, crow. very, very much.
this:
Hoping for some flicker of recognition
An eye turned in kindness, not despair.
ouch.
this:
Hoping for some flicker of recognition
An eye turned in kindness, not despair.
ouch.
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re: Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 2:46am
Thanks, Minerva. That's hoping for the look from an old friend, if there's one still around.
Re: Sylvia
Anonymous
6th Feb 2015 3:05am
Oh Crow.....this so moved me.....beautiful sad sensitive write......felt it....xo :)
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re: Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 4:49am
Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 5:51pm
So Beautifully Haunting and the ending was Superb...Wonderfully Captured Crowfly...I work with Alzhiemer's patients at a nursing home...such a devastating disease..it truly robs a person of themself,not just their memories,but of their feeling of connectedness to friends, family, and the world in general...it all fades away as you flawlessly depicted here...i've seen that fearful vacant stare countless times..truly heartbreaking
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re: Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 8:58pm
The friend that inspired this poem is the only person I know that suffers from Alzheimer's but her ordeal is heartbreaking. Fortunately she's not on her own. She's got friends. Bless you for helping those patients!
Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 8:45pm
That is scary. I'd like to go before my memories leave. Great work Crowfly. :)
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re: Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 9:00pm
Re: Sylvia
6th Feb 2015 9:15pm
I love the sentiment in this Crowfly - That even in ghostly form we seek those rare commodities - compassion and acknowledgement.
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re: Re: Sylvia
7th Feb 2015 2:22am
Yes, and hopefully find some remaining with the love and patience to provide. Thanks, Frank.
Re: Sylvia
7th Feb 2015 2:30am
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7th Feb 2015 4:42am
Re: Sylvia
12th Feb 2015 10:30am
So lonely, half-alive and gone. Once a man, twice a child. We should never forget those who can't remember life.
Thanks for bringing light to an important social issue, crowfly!
Thanks for bringing light to an important social issue, crowfly!
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